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Quiet juxtaposes sound; a time when mute thoughts abound. And though quiet may seem rare, it can be found anywhere. Quiet resides in stillness, a respite from life's shrillness. From cell phones to children's toys; we get bombarded by noise. Quiet's a sanctuary; when chaos becomes scary. And quiet's a peaceful state; that regulates your heart rate. Quiet is a time of bliss; comparable to a kiss. It's a feeling of calmness; you've garnered from aloneness. Quiet's that extended hush when your mind tells you to shush. And morphs into a gateway; when you need to get away.

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Date: 5/14/2023 2:45:00 PM
you excel at so many forms Emile, I must check out your contest using this form hope I have time to write for the contest!:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2023 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, as always, I appreciate your comments. I've extended the time the contest ends...so I hope to receive an entry from you, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/6/2023 7:44:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, Emile. Well done. Blessings.
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Date: 5/7/2023 10:02:00 AM
Thanks, Emate, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2023 12:50:00 AM
Love it! Awesome write and example. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/3/2023 3:31:00 AM
Emile, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/3/2023 8:10:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2023 4:23:00 PM
A great form Emile, as I've noted from your current contest. You have beautifully demonstrated how should be written with your sweet "Quiet". Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/3/2023 8:10:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2023 4:14:00 PM
Love how you did this in that new style you are showcasing. I imagine this won. Sure hope so, and so I'll say Congratulations.
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Date: 4/3/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2023 8:38:00 PM
"Quiet" is a beautiful word and something precious, especially now that we are bombarded with noise from different sides. "Quiet is a time of bliss / comparable to a kiss." Lovely lines.
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Date: 4/2/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, Ryan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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