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Queen Tamar

She had a sword To cut of the heads Of subjects not fitting She has a heart That lies upon a cold stone Torn, withered A knight from afar On horseback did ride Passing by the tombstone He glanced, the wind at his back He slowed, for no reason Other than chance He unmounted and strolled over To this old stone of long ago And felt the beating heart Of the past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/26/2013 1:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/27/2013 9:25:00 PM
thank you so much!!!
Date: 2/23/2013 5:33:00 PM
What an masterful tale you have spun! Thanks for sharing. The imagery of the beating heart was....moving! Thanks for your visits to my work! I appreciate it! :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 10:37:00 AM
- A Queen ..... a special lady. - A lovely poem Arthur. - Have a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 5:05:00 AM
WOW! Very nice... well chosen words to tell your romantic tale, my friend! Kudos!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2013 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Jack Queen Tamar was the "King of Georgia" from 1184 to 1213, very smart woman for her time.
Date: 2/23/2013 3:12:00 AM
loved it . ....Seren
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Date: 2/23/2013 2:39:00 AM
Seems like you were reflecting in this poem. I made me think of someone from my past that was once very important.
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