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Purity

I At the innocent age of sixteen I was sinless, Pure as driven white snow and totally trusting; And I fell in love, oh, it was more than fondness, This was true love, my soul and heart was yearning; I was smitten, besotted, how I longed for his soft caress, We would walk hand in hand with such wide-eyed innocence; So clean and fresh, unworldly, inexperienced and so full of purity, Our world was small but our endless, devoted love was so immense, Naïve, gullible and demure, how I blushed pink when he said I was pretty. II I waited for him breathless at my home, On his motorcycle we would fly unguarded; We liked to find little country towns to roam, O, I adored him and I was fascinated, infatuated; We drove the motorcycle on beaches through foam, I dreamt at night that this true love would be my groom; The days, weeks and years have passed since this pure love, He was not my groom, he did not age one day, he dwells above, I still hold this childhood love so dear and often go to visit his tomb. ______________________________ May 6, 2015 Poetry/Ode/Purity Copyright Protected, ID 04-670-704-06 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, When Love Was Innocent, sponsor, Justin Bordner, HM, Judged 2015

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Date: 5/28/2015 5:48:00 AM
This is such a sad beautiful piece, Broken. A 7 . Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading.
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:17:00 AM
This is .....just amazing.... congrats on your Honorable Mention... the ending again, is so tearful and heart wrenching... but I can't help but love the piece... his story will live on.... what a sweet tale of two pure youths... Always, Laura
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Date: 5/19/2015 4:54:00 PM
Great resultant H M here B W all the best..'
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:29:00 AM
Broken, this one's my fav. Congratulations. SKAT
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Date: 5/15/2015 5:23:00 PM
Amazing write, Broken. Such wonderful but sad imagery in this pure love you have experienced, but lost so young. Best wishes for the contest--hope to see it high on the list! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:53:00 AM
WoW! It touched my heart,good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/6/2015 12:45:00 PM
This touched my heart. In the end it left me sad. Beautiful write. Your poems always evoke deep emotions. Very impressive. A #7
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