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Prison Non-Stop

never ending walls No opening to escape claw marks on the brick infinite walking excercise for the sinners we're carving out hell three guards stand watching mocking the lame sufferers spitting at our feet ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is for Abe Lopez's Van Gogh's Van Goghs Title of painting: The Convict Prison Artist: Vincent Van Gogh Year:1890

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Date: 10/11/2009 12:17:00 PM
Interesting write here, Savannah. Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest! I'm not familiar with this painting but you have peeked my curiosity to go look it up ... smile ...
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Date: 10/8/2009 12:46:00 PM
Wow! I really love this. Very clear description of what a prisoner goes through, innocent or guilty. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:12:00 AM
Well done Savannah in your fourth placing in Abe's contest, lovely poem >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:01:00 AM
An excellent poem. Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/8/2009 9:06:00 AM
I wasnt familiar with this work..you described it perfectly. Congrats on your fine win. BG
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Date: 10/8/2009 7:56:00 AM
Wow Savannah! You captured the feeling of this prison, and the misery! Well done, congratulations on this winner! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/8/2009 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest Savannah. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 11:51:00 PM
Dear Savannah, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Abe's contest. Fantastic writing! Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/7/2009 8:24:00 PM
Savannah, congrats on your success in Abe's contest...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:03:00 PM
Interesting work describinb Van Gogh. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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