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Prismed Skies

Each day at dusk, prismed skies unfold Pink threads are woven with rays of gold Sunset's glow is reflected in soft glimmers on waves rippling in serpentine shimmers Earth is a painting in roseate pastel light brushed at twilight, among clouds in flight December 7, 2021 Bite Size Poem No29 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2021 10:03:00 AM

Line, congratulations on your win in Line's contest, your poem is so beautiful ~ love and serenity _Constance

Lin Lane
Date: 12/15/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Constance.

Valsa George

Date: 12/12/2021 10:03:00 PM

This is indeed beautiful ! A visual treat Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/15/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/12/2021 11:29:00 AM

WoW! Lin, Reading your poem was like viewing a breathtaking piece of art. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 12/15/2021 11:22:00 AM

What sweet remarks, Alexis. Thanks!

Gary Radice

Date: 12/12/2021 3:57:00 AM

I love your pallet of words on the canvas Lin. Cheers - Gary

Lin Lane
Date: 12/15/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Gary.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/12/2021 3:19:00 AM

Beautifully picturesque verses. Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/12/2021 3:22:00 AM

Merci, Chris.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/11/2021 8:50:00 PM

Back with congratulations for your win! Just a lovely picture painted for our repeated enjoyment. Blessings!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2021 10:45:00 PM

Thanks ever so much.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/11/2021 8:03:00 PM

Such a beautiful, descriptive poem, Lin. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2021 10:44:00 PM

Thank you very much, Janice.

Ann Peck

Date: 12/11/2021 3:21:00 PM

Majestic poem, Lin! Such beautiful imagery!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2021 10:44:00 PM

Thanks so much, Ann.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/11/2021 2:57:00 PM

Lovely poem. Well penned.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2021 10:44:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating my words, and for the honor of being on your winning list, Line.

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/8/2021 1:41:00 PM

Very beautiful Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2021 2:29:00 PM

Sincere, thanks, Mark.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/8/2021 8:43:00 AM

Enjoyed this metaphor "Earth is a painting in roseate pastel light"

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2021 2:28:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Caren.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/7/2021 2:53:00 PM

A shimmering twilight and a beautiful poem full of light and promise. Thank you for sharing your talent gl Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vie.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/7/2021 9:31:00 AM

So lovely Lin! Every word creates the brush strokes of your poem painting. Best wishes for the contest. So nice to see you back at the soup. Blessings.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2021 9:40:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sam. I am pleased to be back and welcomed by so many. It's greatly appreciated.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2021 8:34:00 AM

Loved every word Lin, thanks for posting your amazing imagery!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2021 9:39:00 AM

Thank you for providing me with your supportive thoughts, JD.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/7/2021 7:29:00 AM

Saved the best line for last. "brushed at twilight, among clouds in flight", is a nice mix of motion and color. Even in bite size, the gift shines throguh. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us Lin. Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2021 9:39:00 AM

I am so gratified by your remarks, Bill. Thank you very much.