Presence Beyond My Mind

A Sistine Chapel lies outside our house,
a cellar used by former runaways.
Recalling stories from our grandpa Joe,
remember how he always kept a horse
to transport couples found in hiding there. 

The ceiling shelves deflect a spotlight's eye
from secret spots where common folk once hid. 
Consider how he felt, my grandpa Joe,
his future jeopardized within our town.
Even with the best of good intentions,
slave owners' law - greater than freedom's law.

My grandpa kept the ceiling stocked with food
for needy refugees to take their fill
in building strength to last their journey through.

Sometimes when I am zapped and cannot cope
I am compelled to grab a light and go
descending on this niche of grace and peace.
A ceiling with more beauty is not found 
than grandpa's Sistine Chapel underground.

written 03-01-2018
contest: Eight Word Challenge - 24 lines maximum by Robert Haigh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Reason , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:20 PM
A very beautiful and touching poem, Reason. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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March 15, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Reason, this piece is thrilling, moving, and SO well-written!. CONGRATS! Janice
Barden Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:39 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, RAP - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:00 PM
This is great, and what a story. Congrats, Reason. Regards, Viv
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Very touching. Love your poem, Reason. Congrats.
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March 14, 2018 at 8:37 PM
thanks, Line, for taking the time to leave a comment and rewarding words.
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Congrats on your win, Reason :)
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March 14, 2018 at 2:03 PM
I welcome your kind words, Laura and wish you well.
Gupta Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Enjoyable blank verse and a nice story ... enjoyed reading ...
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March 2, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Probir. TYVM
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Not only the story behind your poem is awesome..the way you wrote this poem is extraordinary..great skills you have RAP! This poem ranks at the top of winners list in my mind.
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March 2, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Appreciate the read and reply, Vijay. You are too kind, but I love it.
Rv Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:59 PM
This is a beautiful story! Lovely blank verse.. so vivid and unique. Hope this does very well in the contest :)
Poteet Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Glad you read it and left such a nice reply. I enjoyed the write and while a placement would be welcomed, I’m always happy when someone comments before the contest is judged.
Raynes Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:40 PM
wow, this is beautiful scenery and a great story of a time gone by (hopefully) you must be so proud of ur grandfather :)
Poteet Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 9:38 AM
TY, Lewis, while it was not about my own grandfather, I would be proud to claim any one of many who helped slaves gain their freedom after the war. Thanks so much for commenting
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