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Prelude

As the taupe-toned twilight begins to capture the day~ his image is slowly etched upon the drifting penumbra waiting to immerse in her winter dreams. And as the nocturnal shades slowly transform~ from sepia to radiant hues; He swims into her lake of blue~ as her fiery eyes emit igneous air that lightens silent secret sanctuaries melting them in shaded winter dreams. His hands fill the spaces of her arid fingertips~ making her glide one more time into another episode of winter dreams. 02.06.2021 “P” Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 2/3/2023 8:59:00 PM
Quite an interesting one, JCB, congratulations:)
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Date: 2/3/2023 1:40:00 PM
As beautiful as a living painting! I love the transition from sepia to radiant hues.
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Date: 2/3/2023 11:45:00 AM
Nicely penned, congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Date: 2/3/2023 10:49:00 AM
Ohh, nice one! Congrats on the win! :)
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Date: 2/3/2023 9:10:00 AM
A huge CONGRATS on your WINS with this great poem, JCB. Janice
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Date: 10/5/2021 8:21:00 AM
Unica, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this poem, I find it quite beautiful, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/3/2021 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Unica! Prelude is the perfect theme for you not only musically but romantically. Such a lovely use of color in this "prelude" to this romantic interlude! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 9/27/2021 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Friend. Such a beautiful poem - with colourful images - you are great with romantic poems. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 9/27/2021 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Prelude" is a wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 9/27/2021 12:28:00 PM
Oh JCB this is so wonderfully romantic and your use of colour is exquisite, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2021 11:09:00 AM
Absolutely dreamy. You are one of the best poets here for imagery!
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea for your constant support and motivational words. I am humbled by your words.
Date: 2/7/2021 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful use of color in your very romantic verses of "silent, secret sanctuaries" JCB! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Sam. More power.
Date: 2/7/2021 10:11:00 AM
You write beautifully, like a a ship at sea. I really appreciated the skillfully written verse dear JCB. Thankyou for sharing it.
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thank you dear Mystic Rose Rose for your uplifting comment..
Date: 2/7/2021 7:38:00 AM
Wow ~ this is amazing, JCB. I love it !
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Ms. Line..I appreciate your heartwarming comment. Blessed day.

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