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May- 31- 2026

Ponder Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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Ponder

“The quality of our life will improve if we spend sometime pondering over life’s questions. In every thoughtful pause, brighter gleams of wisdom will flash”~ By Poet

             As I sat alone on the river bank,
   I saw the blue sky dotted with white clouds.
               The sun was in its last lap of race.
     The slanting beams gleamed in crystal glow.

              This sight invited my mind to wander.
  I began pondering over the evening of my life~
           The paths I walked, the roads I trod
      The victories and defeats of life.
    They invaded my mind like an insurgent army. 
          The gleaming flashes of the sinking sun,
      Drew a montage of diffused memories.

 Discordant thoughts came rushing in.
      I chanced to think of Time and the River
   The twin forces making a unique pair;
 Unable to get back from whence they came.
             They rush forward ever and anon.

Isn’t our life too like a flowing river
    Speeding to some unknown destination? 
             I thought, life here is only a hiatus.

 What’s the purpose of our life?
              What should be our priorities?
          Seated in the lap of solitude,
    My mind began to ponder in silence.

  The muffled murmur of the river in flow,
           Didn’t disturb my stream of thought.
 I was on a piggyback ride on stoic thoughts.
            I sat in silence sage like, pondering deep,
     On the meaning and purpose of life.

  Everything around fell silent and still
             And shadows started to form around.
      Didn’t sense the passage of time,
  Until a dark shroud wrapped me all too sudden.
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Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 4:08 AM
Sometimes life does invite that kind of thought, and I always hope I come away a much richer in spirit person, Valsa. I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go. Congratulations on this winner. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Ponder" write/quote. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Guptar Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your high win in this contrest with a beautiful poem pondering on the evening of your life and life in general. It well lknown that life is like time and river,. Like them it does not flow backwads but always forward. Wishing you a pleasant weekend moving forward.
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 3:46 PM
I bet this scores really high. It is so well written and truthful. Congrats. And keep up that golden pen
La France Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:33 AM
Valsa, beautifully penned, love quote. Congratulations on your win in my Ponder Contest ~
George Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 9:21 PM
Thanks a lot Constance for the sweet comment and the placement given.
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Back with hearty congrats on your win, pleasure to read your work, Valsa.
Jones Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 2:04 AM
Valsa a well written and thought provoking poem this is! Enjoyed reading and congratulations on your win!
DiMino Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Wow, quite a bit of deep pondering, well done. Had me pondering. There is no answer as to purpose, if one thinks we are hear somehow to change the world. We are here to change ourselves. Do that, and the world will follow. If one wants to know how lost and confused we are inside, simply look at all the confusion in the outside world. The outer world is a reflection of who we spiritually are and how far along the path of ascension we have traveled. Not far yet.
Poet Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 3:52 AM
On a technical basis, your poem is proficiently composed, Valsa. Both imagery and diction are outstanding. Metaphors and similes are especially powerful, such as the "insurgent army" of memories and the "piggyback ride on stoic thoughts."With the "dark shroud," the conclusion adds a feeling of finality and intensity that strikes an emotional chord. A sure winner
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