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Pond of Dreams

I visited the pond of dreams Whose waters reflect your imagination Scooped up in two cupped hands An H2O mirroring sensation. I sipped a dream of unicorns And tasted flying carpets Drank a bit of pirate ships These visions were the sharpest. Come take a look and you will see What your imagination recalls I may see a dragon’s wing While you see Taj Mahals.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 2:32:00 PM
This is one of the most imaginative ones I 've seen. I like it very much. Congratulations. HOpe you might come pick a flower at my blog!Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "The Power in Your Hands". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 4:00:00 PM
Hi Joe... am smiling at the amazing leaps in stanza two!!!! "drank a bit of pirate ships" good stuff....jimbo
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:37:00 PM
well written and great win!!! congrats!! Michael
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/23/2010 12:36:00 PM
Many congratulations Joe on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:49:00 AM
How beautiful. Yes we all saw it differently. congratulations on your win. Lvoe, joyce
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:46:00 AM
This may be my favorite..unicorns, pirates..what else could a person want in a poem? lol congrats. BG
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:25:00 AM
There are many images that come to mind, let them all be built of loves's kind. Congratulations, Joe, on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:57:00 AM
I enjoyed your fantasy interpretation of the picture, Joe. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:43:00 AM
wow...this one gave me what I call the "moofasah" effect(reference-"The Lion King")--those tingly little goosebumps that only powerful words can bring....I am looking forward to enjoying more of your wonderful writing. And thank you for the HM in your contest, and for your kind words,I am humbled:)--TK
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:34:00 PM
What a lovely poem. It should do very well. Now you can write a poem about your first in sponsoring a contest. Terrific job and it must have been hard. Thank you for my second place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading these exceptional verses.. Celene!
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Date: 6/17/2010 11:34:00 PM
Great Write Joe.....Larry
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Date: 6/17/2010 9:52:00 PM
interesting, very imaginative write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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