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The concept of eloquence dates back to the Rhetoric of the ancient Greeks, Calliope (one of the nine daughters of Zeus and Mnemosyne) being the Muse of epic poetry and eloquence. Hermes, the Greek God, was a patron of eloquence. (Wikipedia.com)

a poet’s pension is his pen-- the pen that siphons words from the world in solitary luxury he sometimes concedes his kinship with the world-- a world in which he lives alone groping for the perfect words, his own masterful soliloquy the world often misunderstands his soul yet he understands his sensitivity, his ability, his prowess-- his need for unveiling eventually his words become a display of beauty, intention, truths— truths he eloquently pens

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/31/2023 6:29:00 PM

Sweet and swiftly flows your pen, Sara! ... though I have to confess I was hoping for a link to tap into 'a poet's pension.' lol. 401 K'er

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/31/2023 4:28:00 AM

I would say there are times when a poet conveys different points of view, but would condemn misunderstandings. A Lovey gem of a poem-blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:43:00 AM

thank you for your thoughtful words, Victor. I agree. Sometimes we convey different points of view, sometimes unknowingly. Have a blessed day, Sara

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/31/2023 4:13:00 AM

You have such a gift with words! I travel your path every day! Thank you dear Sara! xxx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:42:00 AM

ahhhh...thank you sweet Jack for your kind words. You're a special poet along the poetic journey. Have a splendid Tuesday, xxx Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 10/30/2023 5:51:00 PM

I liked this. You described a real poet's journey...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:41:00 AM

thanks, Paige. I appreciate your comments and visits, Sara

Max Burchett

Date: 10/30/2023 3:09:00 PM

You found the perfect words. Well said! Kudos to you! Best, Max

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/31/2023 4:41:00 AM

thank you, Max, for your enthusiastic and positive words. Grateful! have a pleasant Tuesday, Sara

Paul Bell

Date: 10/30/2023 2:33:00 PM

Good pension plan to have, and if distributed properly, gives out hope to us all.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:36:00 PM

well said, Paul! Thanks for stopping by and for that insightful comment. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2023 12:59:00 PM

a poet's pension indeed Sara, i hope my pen never runs low on ink and I can't afford refils!:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:23:00 PM

thanks, Jan, for stopping by and for your upbeat comments. Yes, ink refills are expensive these days. :-) Wishing you a splendid day! hugs Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2023 12:14:00 PM

- "in solitary luxury" ... with his own thoughts ... always "groping for the perfect words" ... the words of the soul, Sara - A beautiful poem of truth :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:24:00 PM

thank you, Anne-Lise, for your thoughtful words and observations. I'm grateful you found my poem one of truth. Hope it inspires, too. hugs across the ocean from me to you, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/30/2023 9:24:00 AM

"the world often misunderstands his soul yet he understands his sensitivity, his ability, his prowess-- his need for unveiling" -- Beautiful! Right or wrong, is of less consequence than dedication and self conviction. The world will decide while the Poet must life!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:25:00 PM

thanks for your visit Joe. With your words, I felt the strength and conviction of your character! You're right, the poet must live and write from his convictions and heart. I appreciate your comments. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 10/30/2023 9:12:00 AM

What a good poem, siphoning words.. excellent

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:26:00 PM

thank you, Clive, for stopping by. I appreciate your comments and view of my poem.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/30/2023 9:00:00 AM

Thank you for this poem. Introspection is important to poetry.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:27:00 PM

thanks, Hilda, for visiting my site. I agree, introspection and patience are keys to writing meaningful poetry. Have a splendid afternoon, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/30/2023 8:30:00 AM

Oh Sara, how endearing it sounds to me, A Poet's pension, his or her pen, sounds like we can't do without some days, most day, love :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:28:00 PM

I agree with you. Some days I can't live or at least be content without writing most days. I have 'stuff' in my heart and head that yearns to be free. :-) Have a fabulous evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/30/2023 6:37:00 AM

Dear Sara, your poem glows like paradise with appealing words in every line. A rhyme and rhythm symphony results from each line harmonizing. Your beautiful picture captivates readers. You used wonderful phrases that communicate profound meaning and evoke powerful emotions. You skillfully weave beauty, purpose, and incontrovertible facts throughout your poems. Poets' power and brilliance astound and satisfy readers. Beautiful poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:31:00 PM

thank you, dearest Sotto, for your eloquent and encouraging comments. I find your words both poetic and inspirational. I'm grateful you see what's hidden within the lines and words. I truly enjoyed 'weaving' this one together. I'm glad you seemed to relish its intricacies. Thank you! May you have a day filled with poetic thoughts & words, Sara

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2023 5:51:00 AM

A penchant for writing gives the poet joy, Wonderful write

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:32:00 PM

thank you, kind sir. Yes, a penchant creates such contentment. I appreciate your comments. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2023 5:47:00 AM

eventually his words become a display of beauty, intention, truths—truths he eloquently pens-- a rewarding conclusion to power of a poet's pen. Splendid poem, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 2:33:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Vijay. I'm grateful for your confidence-building comments. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/30/2023 5:20:00 AM

I love this! The alliterations and how you’ve written about a poets pension, as pen. Thats deep and it made me think too. Especially the lines “ the world often misunderstands his soul“ i think many can resonate with that strongly as so many feel this way. “ his need for unveiling“ exactly why most of us write, a form of relief, to release inner most emotions. And that last stanza is so true, what we display with our words are our truths eloquently delivered. Love the note too: very insightful.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/30/2023 4:25:00 AM

Just beautiful and gloriously alive, flaming with delight, a poet's pension for sure... love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/30/2023 4:57:00 AM

thank you, Gina. You are most kind. I'm grateful you found my poem delightful and gloriously alive. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara