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Written for Ink Empress, 'Unwritten Absence' poetry contest.

 

Poetry and Me

“This poetry. I never know what I'm going to say.
I don't plan it.
When I'm outside the saying of it,
I get very quiet and rarely speak at all.”
Rumi

Poetry, 
sometimes you can be cruel, 
manipulating me to express thoughts
which I've secretly suppressed. 
You poach pieces of my soul,
massacring my masculinity,
revealing my vulnerabilities -
you make me look like a fool. 

Have you become the definition of my silence?

Poetry,
your introduction intoxicated my muse, 
bursting drunken lyrics through my veins,
confusing my grammatical accuracy, 
acting like an angry alpha autocrat artist, 
assassinating my adverse alternative alliterations. 
My vocabulary is helpless against your stubbornness. 

Poetry, 
Sometimes I hate you, 
when you are erratic and brutal, 
bleeding unfairly against my will, 
causing pain through vicious verses, 
but, sometimes I love you, 
when you bring soothing serenity, 
flowing sweetly from my calming quill.

Poetry, 
You are a restless rebellious catharsis. 
I don't know if you are a blessing or a curse. 
My life is repression on repeat, 
I'm somewhat an expert, 
yet you create a pathway to open doors, 
creating a balance in an unstable world.

Poetry,
I remember when I forgot you.
In your unwritten absence,
my heart resembled a blank canvas,
but then you returned like a snowstorm in June,
reminding me of Rumi's beloved spirit.
Now you consume my mind,
my speech and my tone -
overtaking a tongue's desires to remain mute.

Poetry, 
I never cared for rhymes, 
until you found me at a time of soul searching,
blooming evergreen words to leave a legacy behind.

I was lost without you.
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Nuwas Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 12:26 AM
I enjoyed to read this, I am still learning, but this is a lovely poem :)
Empress Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:51 AM
This is so metaphorical, it can be about poetry or it can be read as a romantic write, either way , it reads and flows in sheer eloquence, with so many deeply moving emotions that made me feel so much as i read: i think many can resonate with that , poetry bring a rebellious catharsis. I love the stanza where you mentioned “ i dont know if you are a blessing or a curse “ whoa! That hits home for me and the depth of every line woven her with alliterations and excellent wordplay left me speechles-
Empress Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:53 AM
You always know what i would like or any host would like, thats how clever and creative you are as a poet: i absolutely love this poem this is a top fave for. Me. One i would print out frame and hang on my wall too! Not being OTT! Being true! Lol thank you for blessing my prompt! What an honor to have you write! Congratulations on winning
Kaufman Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 7:11 AM
WOW so impressive and wonderfully emotive piece. I could visualize the dialogue between you and your muse. Quite dramatic and most captivating.
George Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:11 AM
"In your unwritten absence, my heart resembled a blank canvas, but then you returned like a snowstorm in June, reminding me of Rumi's beloved spirit." When you forgot her, we missed your poems. But now we know she is consuming your spirit. Let her stay with you ever. Much enjoyed this monologue. Beautiful, Silent one.
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 9:18 PM
This is an ode to poetry, SO, in your unique style:) "I don't know if you are a blessing or a curse" - very true:)
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 1:30 PM
I am kind of the opposite, caring mostly for rhymes, but I do appreciate your cool turns of a phrase and when you use interesting imagery. Always so poetic, Silent One
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 1:01 PM
-"I write poetry because the birds and the flowers cannot write their own poems"... well said - Deeply and great written, S.O. :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Omg this is brilliant! I have been ill so catching up on reading poems. This is a winner. Unique and thought provoking. Good luck in the contest
Baker Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 9:39 PM
Thank you for sharing so much of your personal feelings about poetry with us, Silent One. Your struggles and your genius both come through. It resonates with each reader where they are at with their own growth. Your quote from Rumi was soulful. Sara and I have read several of Rumi books and are motivated by his love of poetry and his beautiful poems on Love. This is a great entry for the contest, my friend. I think it will do well. Let your words flow, we enjoy your poetry. Bill
One Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Bill and you are a gentleman and a great poet. Thank you for always gracing my page.. Appreciated.
Nicole Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 8:28 PM
Words will always be, and while emotions find a way to be expressive through poetry- you can't escape reality. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Brandy..
Hind Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 2:16 PM
I can relate to you, truly.... without poetry, could not image life... I enjoyed your poem!
One Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Paige for your visit.
Williams Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 3:41 AM
Poetry runs through your veins . You're a wordsmith of great depth and creativity.along with being a wonderful source of inspiration to many. Never stop writing S1. Love and hugs .
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Maria.. I will try
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 2:49 AM
So aptly written. Poetry is our soul. I write even when I feel it needs upgrading. I try to rhyme, difficult for me a Maltese.
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Thank you Victor
Downing  Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 8:54 PM
Poetry is your voice and heart. Voiceless yet beautifully touching. So yeah, yours will live on. For me personally, poetry is my therapist ;)
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Thanks Kina
Sharma  Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Poetry covers a broad dimension of emotions and you've expressed that in such a beautiful way here. For me, poetry found my heart at the age of 14, but it became my healer and a necessity two years back and now I'm 18, quite breathing through poetry.. Indeed, it can be raging and aching many times, rather than being therapeutic.. But before it, I never expressed my feelings and it allowed me to scribble feelings in words. This poem is sooo resonating & I guess for many. I could feel every line-
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Thank you for sharing..I'm happy you could relate with this and thanks for the fave
Sharma  Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 8:19 PM
"Poetry, your introduction intoxicated my muse, bursting drunken lyrics through my veins", "In your unwritten absence,my heart resembled a blank canvas" So many impeccable lines here!! Absolutely brilliantly crafted and every line incorporates so much depth.. An impeccable take for Ink's contest and I wish you the best of luck :) A FAV for me!
DiMino Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Poetry: friend and consort, tempter leading to fall, God of redemption, devil of damnation. I believe you covered it all in this profound and beautifully written work. Always a terrific read. Thank you.
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Joe
Ligon Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 7:12 PM
So powerful, this sounds like it's straight from the depths of your heart, just like all the amazing poetry you create. It doesn't make you less masculine to express your emotions, but rather, it seems you have a very high emotional IQ, which is perfect for any poet.
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:46 AM
I was born in a time when men were told not to express their emotions and had a father who always said boys don't cry.. Appreciate your comment thank you
Situation Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Must be all incompleat pieces. Anyway it is poetry none the less. I read the different styles you sampled and wondered is this a show for the unabled poets.
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:44 AM
What? Totally confused by your comment and you have not understood what it means. What is an unable poet? This poem is about my own relationship with poetry.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Hello Silent One, I began creating poetry in my 50's My first poem was a Free Verse, then verse, and the Il earned more. I enjoyed to read poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Yes silent One I have been writing a long time. Your welcome my friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
One Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:45 AM
You've been writing a long time thank yoi for sharing
Buehler Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:57 PM
I can really identify with this awesome poem, Silent One. I began writing poetry as a teenager, so I've been writing for most of my life, and I can't imagine life without it. :)
One Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Evelyn, appreciate you visit..
M  Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:39 PM
You write so beautifully S.O…..you certainly are not Silent One with your poetry hehe!! Lovely….Debx
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Deb, the name comes from a very deep place..
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:05 PM
A great poem,I cN so relate to your verses.Poetry found me or we found eachother when I was lost....and now I'm lost without it.Poetry leads me to write things which being me serenity od soul, release of emotions,poetry sometimes takes me places I dont want to go..Your poem made me reflect a lot.Lovely.
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Poetry means so much to us poets.. Thank you for your feedback Charmaine..
Y. Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Hi Charma, It's good to see you posting again.
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Wow! S O! I guess I can identify...in some way...with each stanza of this exquisite piece. Hopefully, we all can...and/or do...but just can't express it as well.
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Jim coming from a former English teacher that means a lot.. Thank you..
Teagan Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 10:03 AM
You're always very creative
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:29 PM
So nice to see you.. Eagerly await your poem...
Y. Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Hi Becca, Long time no see. How are you?
Y. Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 7:04 AM
WoW! Silent, This is a poetic masterpiece. You composed this in a way that showcased your message from start to finish. Good title and conent. When I saw the quote from “ Rumi” I recalled that “ Rumi” inspired contest you held years ago. This is exeptional work. In my opinion its a winning write. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day-Alexis
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Hey Alexis, thank you for your comment.. not sure it is a masterpiece to be honest.. always appreciate your feedback..
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