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prose often enlightens trusty thoughts of sense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/7/2023 4:04:00 AM
Good Morning Miss Sara. Hi. Yes, it does. Your title is excellent as is your execution of the lanterne format. Where would we be if we didn't make our thoughts come alive with written words. Nowhere... Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/7/2023 5:00:00 AM
I appreciate you stopping by, dear Lisa. Your comments are so thoughtful, and I'm grateful for your words about the execution of my Lanterne. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/28/2023 5:53:00 PM
Interesting new form for you Sara. I like it! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:53:00 AM
thank you dear hubby...a short lanterne but I tried, right. hugs, me
Date: 11/26/2023 5:37:00 PM
A very wise way of looking at it....
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:54:00 AM
thank you, dear Paige. Have a great day, Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 11:16:00 AM
A lanterne of great wisdom Sara, although a few words it packs a punch. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 12:50:00 PM
thank you, Tom! for your visit and kind words. Hope you continue to heal and improve. Our thoughts our with you, Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 11:13:00 AM
Dear Sara, this is a wonderful, Lanterne poem. Such creativity in your well crafted, chosen words. Few words that express so much with profound thought. You truly are gifted and always an inspiration and delight to read. Hope you are both having a good weekend. Hugs and smiles to you. Xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 2:22:00 PM
awww, thank you, kind Christina. I'm grateful for your positive comments -- they touched me! Yes, we're having a great weekend thus far. Hope you have a splendid one as well. Returning hugs and smiles....Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 6:47:00 AM
Dear Sara, Indeed, one's veracity is undeniable. Your linguistic acumen, particularly within the confines of brevity, remains nothing short of extraordinary. Your perennial brilliance never fails to astound.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 8:36:00 AM
you are most kind, dear Sotto. Your words touched, especially given your diverse poetic skills, diction, and experience in writing poetry. I'm humbled by the way you see my poems and my poetic progress. I'm grateful I astound you; sometimes I astound myself. I truly don't know where words, lines, etc., come from. I'd like to believe they're a gift from that which is bigger than me. I'm grateful for that gift and for the gift of sharing words. Thank you, your poetess friend (and fan) Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 6:44:00 AM
Beautifully poetic, Sara. Much enjoyed.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 8:36:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Vijay; grateful you found this poem poetically beautiful. Your accolades touched me. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 5:29:00 AM
So very true... you always know the right words to use, especially in these short forms... amazing as always..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 8:38:00 AM
wow, thank you, Silent One. I appreciate your kind words about my ability to craft short poems...I'm fascinated with the brevity and conciseness. Grateful for your visits and comments. enjoy your weekend, Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 5:23:00 AM
wise words in this lanterne, nicely put Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 8:38:00 AM
thank you, Clive, for reading this poem and acknowledging the wisdom within the words. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 4:39:00 AM
Ah so good to see you try another lanterne and as always its cute and so well written. I always enjoy reading your poems , whether long or short they deliver a thought or more for readers to ponder upon and resonate with. Tasty thoughts yes, you write prose very well too . I hope your thanksgiving went well. Sending you light always
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 4:45:00 AM
greetings dearest Ink--thank you for your early morning visit and for your kind words about my recent Lanterne. I rather like the form. Your comments meant a lot to me. Yes, we had a rather relaxing Thanksgiving...too much food. Sigh. May you have a day filled with sunshine and hope. Hugs, Sara
Date: 11/25/2023 4:14:00 AM
Oh l love this Sara and the picture looks so inviting and cosy!! Debx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/25/2023 4:46:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Deb. Glad you liked both my poem and picture. Wishing you a pleasant weekend. All my best, Sara

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