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A woman of intrigue behind his imagination Peeking boldly through painter's hesitation Living through ages of welcome admiration Intended as a beautiful but stealth creation Partial facial view subject to interpretation Peeking boldly through painter's hesitation Slender fingers point green eyes wide open Clasped hands invite curious speculation Partial facial view subject to interpretation Thoughts penetrate seeking affirmation Mosaic colors manifest a silent celebration Clasped hands invite curious speculation A solemn beauty of colorful coordination Her posture speaks of creative aspiration Mosaic colors manifest a silent celebration She is alive beaming an artistic explanation A woman of intrigue behind his imagination Her posture speaks of creative aspiration Living through ages of welcome admiration Placed First September 6, 2017 Poems that paint a picture Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 3/5/2023 2:19:00 AM
I think you are referring to a painting similar to that of Mona Lisa. Beautifully rhyming terzanelle. Beautifully depicted.
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:28:00 PM
No surprise for a top prize Vijay, congratulations my friend, well done...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2017 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 9/15/2017 1:03:00 PM
Wonderful writing Vijay, I love the Terzanelle form, you executed it well here, but...also used mono rhyme that is very difficult, but you pulled it off, so a very deserved first place!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 1:46:00 PM
Many thanks John--love your comments!
Date: 9/13/2017 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Subimal--congrats to you as well!
Date: 9/13/2017 7:10:00 PM
Back again.., Congratulations Vijay on your top win! An exquisite poem :) Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 7:35:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 9/13/2017 3:51:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/13/2017 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, excellent Terzanelle so well written. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Roy for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/13/2017 11:27:00 AM
A lovely piece my friend...big congrats on the win : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Tim!
Date: 9/13/2017 8:52:00 AM
Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thank you BW for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/13/2017 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place ... Thanks for conveying congratulations on my second placement ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/13/2017 8:37:00 AM
Congrats!!! Vijay...excellent entry my friend...!'st place...yahoo!!!...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thanks WW for you lovely feedback!
Date: 9/13/2017 8:09:00 AM
Vijay, this is skillfully-written, insightful, and thought provoking. Congratulations on your well-deserved first-place win! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for lovely comments Janice!
Date: 9/13/2017 5:45:00 AM
This is an excellent Terzanelle, it flows and rhymes very well.. It is an excellent poem about the painting.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 6:51:00 AM
Such lovely comments.. such an honor, from a poet of rhythm and art.. thank you!!
Date: 9/11/2017 5:56:00 AM
Lovely poetic interpretation of the painting ... Good luck ... Thanks for liking my Ecstasy ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/6/2017 6:53:00 PM
Very nice poem. Good luck in the contest
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Karen!
Date: 9/6/2017 3:01:00 PM
Excellent poetic expression and rhyme Vijay! Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your lovely comments, as always!
Date: 9/6/2017 1:56:00 PM
- You always paint beautiful pictures with your poems, Vijay - Excellent for this contest, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 3:11:00 PM
Always delighted by your lovely comments, Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/6/2017 12:11:00 PM
Perfect poem painting picture. Good Luck
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 1:15:00 PM
Lovely to hear from you Anisha--thank for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/6/2017 11:35:00 AM
This is beautiful. Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 1:14:00 PM
Always delighted by your visit--thank you Dale for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/6/2017 11:20:00 AM
Vijay, well done enjoyed reading:-) luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thanks you Eve--love you comments!
Date: 9/6/2017 9:24:00 AM
Very well done with this Terzanelle and all that rhyming! Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 1:10:00 PM
Always so happy to hear from you Heidi--appreciate your feedback!

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