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poems swim my sea but drifting in deep slumber . . . I can’t capture them

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Howard Kerr

Date: 10/16/2022 1:02:00 PM

Andrea, A profound statement skilfully executed in this apt Senyru. Congrats on your win. Howard

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/16/2022 8:34:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win, love this one!

Valsa George

Date: 10/15/2022 9:59:00 PM

Don't worry... Andrea. You are a great angler. You are able to catch much more than we do. In many poems you use the sea imagery effectively.

Ann Peck

Date: 10/14/2022 9:07:00 AM

Beautiful! I love the sea analogy.

John Lawless

Date: 10/14/2022 6:47:00 AM

you capture the essence of them Andrea. Thanks for entering the contest

Jack Horne

Date: 10/12/2022 6:44:00 AM

love this clever one

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/9/2022 3:54:00 PM

Well if I know anything about your writing Volume Andrea, it's because you would need A dragnet..'And no these are not contraptions Full of gender disoriented whoever's.' Btw before I Get known for creating a new teminology, lol)) I will Stress; it's because you are quite poliferant or You write lots it's either or the other.? Same Difference, even on different days..And nights I Can't be seen to partial to 'days or nights in these safe Times.' Anyway all the best.'

Jennifer Walker

Date: 10/9/2022 3:49:00 PM

You've captured so many, a few can escape.