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Pioneer

Up on the hill I stumbled upon an old grave site..the tombstone leaning toward the past. An oak shelters it, the sunlight filtering through its leaves gives its crumbling surface a pleasing glow. I return now, again and again to visit with this man, dead now these many years. Would that he could share his perspective on those times..when the view was unobstructed, the land unplowed. I would know how he came to this place, how he lived, his dreams, and his sorrows. Its peaceful there, as if the pace of life has slowed, just for a time. I sit, with one who came before.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/4/2009 4:06:00 PM
Very nice poem Barbara, when i was younger, we used to take a short cut through the cemetery, my i could do the 100m pretty fast>>James
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Date: 12/31/2008 9:07:00 AM
Wow, this is gorgeous poetry, Barbara. I love the line, leaning toward the past. Great and inspiring write. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/30/2008 8:57:00 AM
Barbara thanks for sharing on my piece this morning. This piece is wonderful..I love the idea of listening to distant voices and the many stories buried deep in their souls..you painted a very nice picture...well done Barbara.
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Date: 12/29/2008 5:16:00 PM
Perfect title! Old gravestones always give one pause to reflect... super concept, and a most compelling message. Well done Barbara! Love, Keith
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Date: 12/29/2008 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful and deep reflection on a life from the past. So thoughtful and well expressed. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 8:47:00 AM
I have done just that.....looked at those old headstones, and try to envision the world from those eyes so long ago. If they could see the world today....what a sad state some of those changes have made of our precious land. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/29/2008 2:54:00 AM
Beautiful picture here. my great Grandparents were pioneers, and our family gravesite holds them all, it is a wonder to think about how they did it all. beautiful, love Kristin
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Date: 12/28/2008 8:51:00 PM
Beeg, a very reverant POEM So much respect for "One who came before" Knowledge of the past For someone who told me they have had no inspiration You certainly are coming up with some high Quality POEMS Xliamp LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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