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Personal Awareness

Unity~oneness,
consciousness~awareness.
Unity consciousness on earth,
minds~hearts connected with love.
Could this be real,
or is it just a wonderful dream.
This can happen in some,
people are too evil for it to be world wide.
Unity consciousness is in heaven,
a real place.
Do we strive for this,
some do.
Date Written:5/21/2022

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Date: 6/18/2022 3:07:00 PM
Thoughts to think about, Paula. Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Many things in life to think about. Have a great/blessed day......
Date: 5/30/2022 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Paula. Best of luck in the contest :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your luck. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day......
Date: 5/26/2022 6:46:00 PM
Paula, you have really perceptive reasoning. You've provided me fuel for thought!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2022 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write and I have you thinking. Have a great/blessed day...................
Date: 5/25/2022 7:49:00 AM
This is so absolutely one hundred percent marvelous " Unity consciousness is in heaven, a real place."
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2022 11:39:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Life is a journey, heaven is a real place/home. Have a great/blessed day...................
Date: 5/24/2022 5:02:00 PM
One must always strive towards the type of consciousness you write and think of Paula. No matter how hard, or dark, the journey, how grey or black, this is when a person may question the reason/purpose of it all ... and finally cracks the golden yolk out of that egg.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2022 11:37:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. It is good to see you. Glad you like my "Personal Awareness" write. You are so right in what you said. Many give up way tooooo soon and then miss out. Oh yes, the golden yolk. Life is a journey, heaven is home. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 5/24/2022 2:20:00 AM
Unity consciousness...what a wonderful thought...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/24/2022 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, what a wonderful thought. Have a great/blessed day..................
Date: 5/22/2022 12:24:00 PM
Hello Paula, I strive for this Paula. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2022 10:41:00 AM
Hello Paula, you are very welcome. i enjoyed the poem. Hugs. Darlene.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/22/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day with hugs..............
Date: 5/22/2022 11:56:00 AM
Very insightful thinking, Paula. You've given me food for meditation!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/22/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad I gave you food for meditation. Have a great/blessed day..............