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Perpetual Darkness

On my first spelunking excursion with a few friends I got separated from the group, and hysteria quickly overtook me. The cave led to a dank cavern, and when I lit a match, I could see a kaleidoscope of colors reflected in the stalactite encrusted ceiling. Looking down, it seemed there was nothing but perpetual darkness, and chaotic thoughts raced through my mind. Suddenly I heard a cacophony of screeches and clicks, clamoring towards me from the bowels of the Earth. At that moment, it felt like the apocalypse had arrived, and I half expected to see a horde of demons rushing to devour me. Cringing in fear, I felt the sting of a thousand bat wings hit my face as they swarmed past me, stealing my breath as I soiled my pants. Terrified, I screamed like a little girl in a state of panic, petrified with fear. My friends heard my pitiful cries, and a chorus of snickers and laughs preceded my rescue.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Worst nightmare ever. Well penned, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:05 AM
This is more than fantastic Emile, and that eye..... wow. Such a well deserved win.
Pinet Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Thanks Darren, that creepy eye freaks me out too, as always your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Emile, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this awesome poem and what a creepy image !
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Brocken, I appreciate your support despite the creepy image my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 5:53 PM
you wove the words into a wonderful tale Emile and the pic freaked me out. Congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Thanks Jan, that pic freaks me out too, as always your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Loved every word and the humour added to the poem nicely, congrats on a fine win Emile!
Pinet Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Thank you so much John, your comments always cheer me up my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:48 AM
LOL, Emile! Any truth in your tale! I love spelunking. Loved it all the more, wading through Secret Caverns in Mexico. <3<3 Kim
Pinet Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Hi Kim, no there isn't any truth to this tale I'm too claustrophobic , it's just a made up scenario to write something using all the words provided. Your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 6:44 AM
You used the word very well and created a dark poem.. Well written my friend and good luck in the contest..
Pinet Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Silent one, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
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