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On my first spelunking excursion with a few friends I got separated from the group, and hysteria quickly overtook me. The cave led to a dank cavern, and when I lit a match, I could see a kaleidoscope of colors reflected in the stalactite encrusted ceiling. Looking down, it seemed there was nothing but perpetual darkness, and chaotic thoughts raced through my mind. Suddenly I heard a cacophony of screeches and clicks, clamoring towards me from the bowels of the Earth. At that moment, it felt like the apocalypse had arrived, and I half expected to see a hoard of demons rushing to devour me. Cringing in fear, I felt the sting of a thousand bat wings hit my face as they swarmed past me stealing my breath as I soiled my pants. Terrified, I screamed like a little girl in a state of panic, petrified with fear. My friends heard my pitiful cries, and a chorus of snickers and laughs proceeded my rescue. (Free Verse) 9/20/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 8:50:00 PM
Worst nightmare ever. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/3/2017 5:05:00 AM
This is more than fantastic Emile, and that eye..... wow. Such a well deserved win.
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Date: 10/3/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Darren, that creepy eye freaks me out too, as always your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2017 1:16:00 PM
Emile, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this awesome poem and what a creepy image !
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Date: 9/30/2017 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Brocken, I appreciate your support despite the creepy image my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2017 5:53:00 PM
you wove the words into a wonderful tale Emile and the pic freaked me out. Congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Jan, that pic freaks me out too, as always your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2017 12:34:00 PM
Loved every word and the humour added to the poem nicely, congrats on a fine win Emile!
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Date: 9/28/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much John, your comments always cheer me up my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/21/2017 7:48:00 AM
LOL, Emile! Any truth in your tale! I love spelunking. Loved it all the more, wading through Secret Caverns in Mexico. <3<3 Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/21/2017 11:26:00 AM
Hi Kim, no there isn't any truth to this tale I'm too claustrophobic , it's just a made up scenario to write something using all the words provided. Your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/21/2017 6:44:00 AM
You used the word very well and created a dark poem.. Well written my friend and good luck in the contest..
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Date: 9/21/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Silent one, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.

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