Perfect Poetry Soup

What use is a poet,
if without a pen,
like a chef without
a sharp set of knives.

How bland is the soup,
without sincere ingredients.
Nourishing soul food needs
fresh free verses of vegetables,
sweet syllables of stock
and an alliteration of
parmesan, paprika or parsley.

It is pointless being mute,
when there is so much to say.
But too much salt in the soup,
can leave a bitter taste.

No pen scribes with the same garnish,
each pair of eyes focus differently.
Like they say, 
too many grammar police,
can spoil the broth.

Too much pepper in
a poem will lead to sneezing.
Not all poets,
share the same beliefs.
Not all soup lovers,
enjoy chicken soup- 
especially those with a
vegetarian vocabulary.

In the absence of judgement,
words becomes pure.
With the right ingredients,
the soup is a symphony of flavours.

Let the blood that flows 
from your veins,
become the ink that 
creates the perfect soup.
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M  Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 9:14 AM
A balanced Soup with sincerity thats exactly what we need Mr S! Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Beaufort Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 10:52 AM
SO, you have brilliantly described the essence of writing for poets and also left room for all of us who are so different in style. We can certainly strive for perfection in what we do and hope that the message rings in the hearts of others. However, at least we have the joy to see our own concoctions come together.
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Belated congratulations on your POTD! Enjoyed your creative and unique recipe', especially the last four lines, which add an abiding passion to the dish. All my best. Robert
Roper Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 9:35 PM
Well said, congratulations on POTD. Many blessings
Wolf Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 8:49 PM
Congrats on POTD, Silent One. Quite the high standard you've set for all of us... :) gw
Nicole Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Within the heart are different emotions. With that being said, ' the soup, ' will taste differently as well. No one is perfect, but imperfect moments can be found in perfect poetry. Meaning: We don't feel each emotion in poetry the same way, and that's okay. Word of advice from someone who knows about cooking- never sneak a spice in someone else's food, unless you plan to eat it too. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 4:33 PM
A beautiful and creative way to look at Poetry Soup, Silent One. Congratulations on your fine POTD, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Poet SO. "fresh free verses of vegetables, sweet syllables of stock and an alliteration of parmesan, paprika or parsley" aren't these the right ingredients for a perfect soup? "vegetarian vocabulary" - that's me, Dear Friend! Warmest wishes ~
Rodgers Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Dear Silent One! Your poem on Poetry Soup simmered with flavor! I loved the veggie & spice comparison. Keep serving up those delicious verses! Congrats on POTD! Your Poems always Rock! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Silent! You’ve concocted a perfect Soup! … too many grammar police, can spoil the broth... It is pointless being mute, when there is so much to say…. Not all soup lovers, enjoy chicken soup
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 11:15 AM
- A wonderful and genuine poem, S.O. ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Bowring Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Love this poem dear SO. Many congratulations on POTD. Perfect recipe for a perfect poem and I love vegetarian vocabulary of which I so appreciated (vegan) I love how thoughtful you are, how fair you are to all with your kind, incredibly gifted poetic heart and it shows here. ‘ The soup is a symphony of flavours’ how true! This is a great read for today. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :):)
Slaughter Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 10:06 AM
What a delightfully fresh approach to what we all attempt to do here, S O. Congrats on POTD, as well.
George Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Very well deserving Dear Silent. Big congratulations on your POTD. Attending the function covers up for being late. I really love the metaphors and symbolism used. A fantastic recipe for writing. However, there are certain ingredients that a soup cannot do without and you've said it all. Cheers.
Proxenos Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 9:47 AM
What an amazing poem SO I love it. Your poem has such character that it speaks to me about the ingredients I should add to make a perfect poetry soup. Not too much salt can leave a bitter taste and too much pepper in a poem will lead to sneezing 'In the absence of judgement, words become pure' .... 'Let the blood that flows from your veins, become the ink that creates the perfect soup'. Huge congratulations my friend on the much deserved honour of POTD. Blessings and hugs Jennifer,
Anaya Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 9:08 AM
The soup du jour is my favorite, the chef is most generous with ingredients that make a symphony of flavours. Back with congratulations on your POTD SO!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading about your fun soup again. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend...................
Buhagiar Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Congrats on your POTD. A great recipe to be read often.
May Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Every 'soup' needs "fresh free verse with vegetables,", Congrats on POTD
Gentile Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Silent, I am totally in love with your Chef's choice of a literary recipe for Soup! It shall remain my Menu Del Dia! Congratulations on your POTD honors! Now, back to the kitchen!!
Lane Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 4:28 AM
Bland broth is tasteless but you’re right about having too much pepper. Finding the correct blend of ingredients makes it tasty and appetizing for everyone. Congratulations on having your soup chosen as potd.
Williams Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Your poem has me craving for a good old fashioned soup, nothing like a perfect soup on a cold winters day. Let the blood that flows from your veins, become the ink that creates the perfect soup. I love these lines S1. A perfect choice for your well deserved POTD. Congratulations...Hugs
M  Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 3:54 AM
Lovely poem Mr S! Congratulations on POTD....Debx
Elliott Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 3:34 AM
An imaginative and eloquent POTD. A big Congratulations, Silent One. Enjoy your special poetry day. All the best. :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 2:49 AM
SO, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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