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since I was a child fumbling and stumbling my friends always at my side my quiet shyness misunderstood and prejudged leaving me confused unfair bullying leaving me a weeping wreck lost inside myself this love of writing learning poetry and verse loneliness presumed from ruin to joy my value unjustly made a misjudged beauty I use life's sadness to comprehend my past ghosts this messed up journey I write poetry to mend a fallen down girl now a poet born __________________________ July 4, 2015 Poetry/Senryu/perceived Copyright Protected, ID 15-686-431-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Senryu On Being Misjudged, sponsor, Marvin Celestial Second Place Poem Of The Day, July 5, 2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/28/2015 11:22:00 PM

Just found this jewel shining so bright. Truly wonderful poem. Bravo!!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:26:00 AM

Lovely string of senryus BW! Congrats on superb win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/24/2015 10:40:00 PM

BW, I enjoyed this the first time I saw it. Congratulations on your awesome win. :-)Alexis

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2015 7:41:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 4:49:00 PM

Broken, congratulations, awesome senryu. SKAT LOVE

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2015 11:16:00 AM

Like always a marvelous verse congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs dear friend Eve

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/24/2015 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Broken! hugs

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/24/2015 10:10:00 AM

One of the best! Congratz my friend!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 8:19:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Broken wings:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 7/15/2015 9:20:00 PM

Beautiful, from one who is an extreme introvert and a daughter whom I am concerned about for her issues.

Mohamed Adel

Date: 7/6/2015 7:01:00 AM

A touching poem that I think it tells the story of almost every poet, it's like poetry needs suffering! Good job!

Nandita Das

Date: 7/6/2015 6:45:00 AM

Wonderful poem. All your writes are deep, meaningful and impressive....beautiful . 7

Grace Mutindi

Date: 7/6/2015 6:12:00 AM

This is lovely Broken wings...all the best in the contest!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/6/2015 12:26:00 AM

The ups and downs of your past journey has led you to this place and the poet you were born to be, Constance. I'm inspired by the emotive beauty and honesty of the words you share with us. Congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda

Shane Cooper

Date: 7/5/2015 5:53:00 PM

I am moved by your words. It is a heartfelt poem my friend. Truly you are a poet born. love Shane xxx

James Peranteau

Date: 7/5/2015 5:06:00 PM

Whether born with or learned, you truly have the gift of write dear poet, and reading your write's keeps my know of yourself intact ! TY Have a wonderful week Constance....much love, james

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 7/5/2015 2:56:00 PM

Wow. This is beautiful and I can TOTALLY relate! Great job!!! --Cindi--

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 2:09:00 PM

"Truely wonderful, B.W. good luck in the contest but also congratulations on Poem of the Day Hugs Eve

Tim Smith

Date: 7/5/2015 12:51:00 PM

and a wonderful poet you are....congratulations on being featured today...Tim

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/5/2015 12:49:00 PM

BW, this is an awesome write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 7/5/2015 12:47:00 PM

such an emotional string of Senryu congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/5/2015 12:40:00 PM

A lovely sentimental write that is based on experience is twice as powertful. Broken. Congratulations on your POTD! hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/5/2015 9:41:00 AM

Oh, My dear Broken Wings...you don't do anything half way, do you? This is lovely...I'm so glad to see that you have poetry to medicate. I do too. It's therapy for the soul. CONGRATS! Happy for you. Hugs

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/5/2015 9:21:00 AM

Congrats BW on POTD!! Most Excellent!! Cheers, Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2015 8:59:00 AM

What a glowing entry for the contest Constance. It is sure to bring high on the winner's list!