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Peaceful Moments

I sit on my stoop and survey my domain. Can't think of a reason I have to complain. The fuchsia is thirsty. I give it a squirt, And some for the dahlia, it truly can't hurt. My roses are blooming, the birds are about, Teaching their nestlings to sing, there's no doubt. It's the first days of summer and bees are abuzz, Working as hard as a busy bee does. Though I know my Utopia, may not be for long And sooner or later, some things might go wrong, For this peaceful moment all's right in my world As my Nation's flag flies, unfettered, unfurled. For Two Hundred Thirty Three years she has flown, Those bits of bright color that Betsy had sewn. We'll all be saluting her, on her birthday. Old soldiers will march and the school bands will play. We'll think of those who so bravely have gone To fight for our flag so that we can go on With these peaceful moments of sweetness and light As we pray for their safety and the end of their fight. For "In My Perfect World" conteest Honorable Mention

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Date: 7/14/2010 12:18:00 PM
Joyce, a delight to read. My oh my, there have been many perfect worlds to read about. And to live in one is not a lot to ask, if we just had the common sense to work it out. Many congratulations on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Joice on your poem'success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and special honor for u to so enjoy.. hope your comp gets fixed very soon.. miss u .. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:05:00 PM
This is a lovely write, sounds like a perfect world to me. Enjoyed. Best of luck.
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:59:00 AM
Great write that should do well...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:47:00 PM
Great call Joyce and lots of us in the free world can also say " thank you " , because of such heros . Best of luck in the contest ....
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Date: 5/17/2010 7:40:00 PM
Excellent write, Joyce. Best of luck in the contest. All the best - xxxRalph
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