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My first poem written in Lind30 (7-7-7-9) (syllables) January 25, 2022

I love the home of the free I love the home of the brave I love my freedom of speech United States of America

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/16/2022 10:00:00 AM

Simple…as freedom should be, Bill!

Bill Baker
Date: 3/4/2022 12:23:00 AM

Thank, Kim. We sure seem to make things harder than they have to be sometimes. Sorry I missed your comment earlier. oops! Hugs, Bill

Anil Deo

Date: 1/30/2022 3:29:00 AM

Amen, God bless US of America per these sentiments, milestones paid in blood. Thank u for SERVING & enduring a thankless war, second guessed by a majority in the 1970s? I came to USA in 1983, left in 1988 for my native land. I gave up on Prez. Raegan's1986 Amnesty. Why? I know I can come back to USA, not easy but not impossible with Covid. My two children & my first wife live near D.C. I came "home again" to evangelize, remarried. She has yet to see a land I call PARADISE

Bill Baker
Date: 1/30/2022 10:20:00 AM

May peace be upon you, Anil. We all have a path we must take, for better or worst. Write On! Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/30/2022 1:41:00 AM

I agree Bill. Wholeheartedly.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/30/2022 10:17:00 AM

I do not want a handout; I just want the opportunity to live my life and make my own choices. I'll gladly pay the price for the wrong ones and accept the blessings of the right ones. I wish no one harm. On a lighter note, it's best said in a song I've heard: "All I want to do, is have a little fun ... and I don't believe that I'm the only one. lol Have a fun day, Caren. Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/29/2022 2:23:00 PM

Wow.. Never more needed Bill.' The opposite is done to what is Advised that's being done..' I was Just thinking today on Brexit, was that To some extent a means of dividing people? Started by pro neg world oppressors (that got Out of control ) for them, so covid got pushed Through? I mean the two eras run in tandem One after the other both division driving events Just a thought.'

Bill Baker
Date: 1/30/2022 10:13:00 AM

I see your point, more and more division. If allowed to continue, it will destroy our country and the world we live in. Have a great day, Joe. Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2022 6:42:00 PM

Send this to Joe Biden and Barack Obama. Tell them to get with the program! Thanks, gw

Bill Baker
Date: 1/26/2022 11:37:00 PM

They may not be on the same wave link I'm on Gershon, but everyone has a right to their own beliefs. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry, Bill

Karen Croft

Date: 1/26/2022 1:50:00 AM

amen to that! I want my freedom and thank the brave for giving it to me. my dad is a Vietnam veteran and i like when people thank him for his service!!

Bill Baker
Date: 1/26/2022 7:25:00 PM

Me too, Karen. 1969-1970 Thanks for commenting, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/25/2022 3:33:00 PM

Bill, you've done an outstanding job! It really does adhere to the syllable number and contributes a significant score!

Bill Baker
Date: 1/25/2022 3:40:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad. I'm trying to explore some other forms than my usual for a while. I'll always prefer sonnets, but they're other forms that may communicate my voice as good are better. Thanks for the comments, Bill

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/25/2022 2:24:00 PM

Superb, Bill! Not only does it follow the syllable count, but it also counts for something! I'm with you.

Bill Baker
Date: 1/25/2022 2:37:00 PM

Thanks, Milt. I did it first with 7-7-7-9 words, then tweaked it to be 7-7-7-9 syllables. I'm going to write some more of these. Just have to post as free verse for now. I've been very busy lately, will be catching up on reading and commenting over the next few days. Happy Trails, Bill