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Pangs of Love

A lonely silence fills my broken heart
With rolling tear spilled eyes upon my face
When all the joyful beauty falls apart
To leave a breathless sorrow to embrace
My deepest saddest shadows overwhelm
With voiceless screams from every fallen tear
That flow in waves within this trembled realm
Where all my lovely dreams now disappear
In my loneliness of darkness dreary
Where I will leave my tears without a trace
The emptiness in my soul grew weary
I held the holy essence of its grace

The pangs of love that's lost is always felt
A prisoner once chained with tears I've knelt


12/8/17 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/27/2018 5:49:00 PM
Joyful beauty falls apart, this and last line so moving and heart felt. congrats. bbn
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Date: 1/5/2018 4:19:00 PM
A great poem, Frederic! Congratulations on your 1st place podium win in the contest! Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Frederic. Totally love your last line.
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:22:00 PM
so beautiful dear Frederic, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:14:00 AM
This is a gorgeous write, Frederic - intelligent, rhythmic, and so beautiful! Congratulations on the well-earned top placement, my friend! :-)
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Date: 1/4/2018 6:21:00 AM
This is just simply beautiful Frederic!! So moving. Congratulations on your first place win !!! ~ Judy
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Frederic on your grand win.
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Date: 1/3/2018 8:42:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Frederic for your first place win with your breathtaking sonnet. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 1/3/2018 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your big win, Frederic. This is such a lovely sonnet.
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Date: 1/3/2018 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful in it's sadness, congrats on your stand alone first place!
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Date: 1/3/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your kindness
Date: 12/10/2017 7:28:00 PM
Very moving indeed! Beautifully sad, great write :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 5:34:00 PM
Frederic, your Sonnet is so beautifully written with wonderful flow and rhyme, and so powerfully moving. Congratulations on your poem being honored as Poem of the Day!
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Date: 12/10/2017 4:58:00 PM
Such a moving poem Frederic many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/10/2017 4:50:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on POTD.. eve :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 4:31:00 PM
Frederic, the depths of your sadness over your lost love reaches the innermost space of my soul. Your sonnet is the epitome of melancholy rendered so magnificently. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors!
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Date: 12/10/2017 4:26:00 PM
Frederic, very moving and congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/10/2017 3:25:00 PM
Dear Frederic, I'm honored to have read this---both form and message are perfection.
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Date: 12/10/2017 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations to you!
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Date: 12/10/2017 1:07:00 PM
A beautifully moving piece Frederic! Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! : )
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Date: 12/10/2017 12:08:00 PM
Very well done, congrats :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 11:52:00 AM
Congrats for the honors, dear. One feels the sadness seep into the soul. Well done
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Date: 12/10/2017 11:44:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet Frederic, congratulations for POTD honors, well deserved...
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Date: 12/10/2017 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful work, Frederic. Congratulations on your POTD. ...Fran
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Date: 12/10/2017 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Frederic... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 9:36:00 AM
A very moving sonnet. Congrats on getting POTD!
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