Pages In Time

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In recollections- of my life's journey, thus far the tattered pages flutter in my mind, snapshots . . . black and white and color, drift- faces, glimpses of places. And I stand trembling- as wind takes my tangled hair I walk a green tree lined path the birds are singing . . . I open a rusty, gate- holding, a dew wet red rose. And I see your name- like wings pages are floating I want to run from this place the weeping so loud . . . it is ripping out my, heart- turn, this page for I must leave. ________________________ July 19, 2016 Poetry/Choka/Pages In Time Copyright Protected, ID 16-809-906-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Compose a Choka sponsor, Janis Thompson Sixth Place

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Sandra Haight

Date: 7/24/2016 5:37:00 PM

Broken Wings, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2016 9:11:00 AM

Such an emotional write Constance:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/23/2016 7:37:00 PM

A cameo of memories are in this choka. Congratulations and thanks for being in my contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2016 2:04:00 PM

Reads like a winning entry to me..Way to go for the contest..Very poetic to be a Choka..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Sara

Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2016 3:58:00 PM

Sara,,thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2016 2:18:00 PM

- We have our memories they will never die .... but wane - Time will nevertheless say goodbye ... until we meet again - Beautiful written, in sad thoughts B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2016 3:59:00 PM

Sunshine thanks for the beautiful ~