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new pages old pages pages of my poetry pages and pages down under under my desk dwelling under in boxes boxes dwelling and mingling boxes dwelling down under my desk desk of this writer desk where I write sad sad poems that drip sad poems I touch touch the words dwelling under touch and love the pages of sorrow sorrow under my desk sorrow of my writing writing of my life writing my mournfullness mournfullness has been my muse mournfullness has made me a poet poet who seeks words to linger down there poet soul entwined in the pages pages down under existing pages that wait wait and exist for dusty years wait existing in boxes boxes of flowing words boxes of rhymes and verses verses of bliss and love verses resting down under under is love that came from my pen under is love forever in painted poems poems penned from my soul poems that dwells on paper below below my soul lives between the lines below my soul lives on the pages pages tattered and new pages I write write and place down under write poems in the night night is when muse is alive night is time for verses and stories stories written in solitude stories beautiful in boxes boxes of solitude I have put away boxes and boxes and boxes boxes of poems weeping weeping words words . . . weeping . . . _______________________________ August 5, 2015 Poetry/Blitz/pages in boxes For the contest, Down Under sponsor, Debbie Guzzi Honorable Mention

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2015 8:18:00 AM

Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Michael Tor

Date: 9/9/2015 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations again on your win Broken Wings...

Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 9:02:00 AM

Broken, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2015 6:59:00 PM

B.W., congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/7/2015 4:16:00 PM

I so wished you had gotten home sooner! Let's just disregard the rules and say it's a fine verse!!! Congrad's! Light & Love

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2015 9:13:00 AM

BW, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 9/7/2015 5:20:00 AM

Wonderfully penned... Congrats on your Win... Hugs, Bobby

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/6/2015 11:41:00 PM

Superb winning write broken, big congrats!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2015 2:41:00 PM

looks like this is a very tricky form - don't think i would know where to begin writing this one - a lovely write

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/7/2015 10:00:00 PM

OK until lines 48, 49, & fifty Constance ;) you're almost there! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/8/2015 7:32:00 AM

line 48 weeping words, line 49 words, line 50 weeping [Constance leave this be dearheart - with these corrections- try again for fun not for my contest this is good-perhaps- decide the title first - plunk it in the appropriate line & let the words flow controlling you, don't try so hard to control them- this is a stream of consciousness form] Light & Love

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2015 11:16:00 PM

Gurrrrrrr. ...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/7/2015 7:18:00 PM

you still have not got it Constance -new pages/old pages/pages of my poetry/ pages and pages down under/under water under the bridge/bridge by the stream/ bridge players/players that cheat/players lose/lose the minds/lose their souls/ souls be damned/souls transform/ transform pride - keep at it. {Just think of it as a puzzle!] transform the universe

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2015 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, let me go back and rearrange lines, not as easy as it looks dear heart

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2015 5:46:00 PM

wow, you not only did a blitz, but you also incorporated that theme "down under" Was that part of the challenge? If so, you did very well. So a blitz is supposed to use the end word twice at the beginning of the next two lines? The form seems so foreign to me, I need to study lots of examples. this showed great creativity, Constance.

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 8/5/2015 7:46:00 PM

I can relate, our life, our musing, our loves on paper, expressed in poems or writings, like boxes of pictures . Enjoyed

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/5/2015 4:53:00 PM

I have lost so many of my words....or are they simply misplaced nouns and verbs....I have written in binders, folders, copy paper, post its, note pads, even receipts.....I am a slave to the words, my heart's undying beats....;)

Pam Deremer

Date: 8/5/2015 4:42:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.