Outside the Lines

Outside the lines 

What is it about poetry 
that so consumes you
Brings you to your knees,
cowering in a corner
of your own delusions
Reading in between the lines,
finding what is not really there
Dropping hints of absurd defiance,
collecting spoonful after spoonful
of puzzled meanings and chaliced dreams

Flowing symbolisms, metaphoric landscapes -
Where bushes are bluebirds
and sidewalks - bridges of no return

Why do you reach
into your pocket, searching for love
on plain white paper folded into a square,
when all along it faces you -
not in ink, but in smiles
expressing exactly what is felt
No boundaries or disguised emotions
penned in rhythmic sequence,
only true love, standing on this sidewalk -
which is only a sidewalk

What is it about poetry 
that so consumes you,
when love is waiting – just outside the lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Chircop Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Indeed What is?Still searching for answers.And indeed how sad to find only the beauty of love between the lines..and not on the sidewalk...
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April 3, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend.
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April 1, 2017 at 5:13 AM
I love this.
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April 3, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Maureen
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April 1, 2017 at 3:18 AM
For me it is the only way to address my feelings. Of love, fear, anxiety. Anything. Good you put this into words. Thanks :)
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April 3, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Thanks so much Darren.
Sands Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Interesting Chris. I can see from these words.. a poet avoiding love on the sidewalk, while writing about it all within the lines. There are so many ways this can be interpreted. :)
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March 31, 2017 at 8:15 PM
That is kind of how I wrote it Heidi. It has a few different meanings to me as well. It is nice to hear another's point of view though. I appreciate you my friend, I truly do.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 4:01 PM
I often ponder that a poet's soul is only understood by another poet who feels and thinks as profoundly as we do. You couldn't have expressed this any better Chris. This is simply amazing. 7 ; )
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March 31, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Thank you so very much Connie. Your kind comments are always such wonderful gifts to me.
Vinson Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 3:55 PM
Chris, I don't know what all it is, but I LIKE IT. : P Like they said in "the old days," right on, man. : )
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March 31, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Thanks so much for this "out of sight" comment Doug
La France Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 3:54 PM
Chris absolutely amazing, yes in deed what drives our need to write, wonderfully penned~
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March 31, 2017 at 4:07 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Cries Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Best of the best
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March 31, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Thanks so much Street Cries. I am glad you liked it.
Ricci Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Dear Chris. It is for certain the emotion that fills outside the lines that which enhances life and love inside the lines. You have stated that concept brilliantly. At least that's how I perceive your words. One either loves poetry or the opposite. There is no in between. It however is in the souls of those who love and understand. Have a wonderful night and thank you for gracing our souls.
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March 31, 2017 at 3:06 PM
That's pretty much it Lisa. And it sure seems to be that way, no in between. No take it or leave it. You are either all in or you're not. Thanks so very much my friend.
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March 31, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Amazing write Chris!!! Poetry well defined.. :) shubham
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March 31, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Thank you so very much Shubham for your nice comment on my poem.
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