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Our Souls Wish List

Our soul’s wish list,
what could be on it?
We are made with a mind~body and soul,
do we really know our soul?
Our mind and body are complicated,
yet easy for us to understand.
Our soul needs much help,
so we can find the wish list written on it.
Searching hard I did find,
my soul’s wish list.
Written upon it,
I must always be loving and kind.
Even when people make me mad,
their emotions cannot become mine.
Seeing other's viewpoints and not my own,
a must for a happy life,
It all takes some time,
my mind~body~soul must learn to work as one.
One's life journey is learning about new things,
one day it will all be so very clear.
Date Written: 12/16/2022
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Date: 12/28/2022 7:28:00 PM
The concluding lines on the need for harmony among body, mind and spirit is the most endearing thought. Congratulations Paula on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:55:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my need for harmony with our mind~body~soul. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
Date: 12/27/2022 9:10:00 PM
"my mind~body~soul must learn to work as one" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/28/2022 8:09:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my soul write. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
Date: 12/18/2022 5:07:00 PM
YOu did a great job with your soul's wish list, and it's so nice having you back here.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2022 9:03:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this write. It is good to be back. Merry Christmas/Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings, Paula..................
Date: 12/18/2022 4:03:00 PM
Your lines are filled with positive thoughts. I’m glad you’re back, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. I am glad you enjoyed my write. It is good to be back. Merry Christmas/Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings, Paula..................
Date: 12/18/2022 3:38:00 PM
This is a beautiful pen, lots of wonderful sentiments and penned from the heart.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2022 9:01:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and kind words. Glad you enjoyed "Our Souls Wish List" write. Merry Christmas/Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings, Paula..................
Date: 12/18/2022 12:06:00 PM
Endearing thoughts, Paula--beautifully expressed!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/18/2022 2:06:00 PM
Thank You, for your note and kind words. Glad you enjoyed this write. Merry Christmas/Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings, Paula..................
Date: 12/17/2022 12:25:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/18/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. I also wish you and your family a Very Merry Christmas. Merry Christmas/Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings/Hugs, Paula..................
Date: 12/16/2022 1:16:00 PM
If only we could follow our soul's list, we could come together again and life would be bright. Take care, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/17/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. You are so right. Guess somethings we just do not understand. Maybe one day. Merry Christmas/Happy New Year With Blessings, Paula..................

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