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Our Romance

One unchained reckless eve, rolling clouds kissed October skies, and my heart I gave to you. As the night enveloped us, new creases traced your gentle smile creating beauty that beguiled me. Every time I looked at you my love grew. 09/24/15 For Love of October Contest-3rd Place Andrea Dietrich 10/20/2015

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2015 9:11:00 AM

wow James a wonderful etheree and acrostic too - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 5/16/2018 7:43:00 AM

Hi Jan, I was looking back at this poem because of your kind SM and noticed I missed your comment. I hate it when I miss a comment. Thank you (and it's only 2 1/2 years late), sorry.

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 10:21:00 PM

Hi James, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 10:56:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT. Awesome is a wonderful word.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2015 11:28:00 AM

A most creative romantic acrostic-etheree, James! #7 Congratulations on your awesome win. // paul

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, for the wonderful comment.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/1/2015 10:48:00 PM

James, a very creative take for the Etheree form and the theme. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 12:15:00 PM

Thank you Sandra. I love writing Etheree but I'm trying to make variations on the triangular look.

Joseph May

Date: 10/1/2015 5:09:00 PM

Very creative ...Congrats on your win

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/1/2015 3:04:00 PM

ah yes, the acrostic etheree...it's a lovely, romantic one - congrats on your win in andrea's contest!

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte, it's nice of you to visit.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/1/2015 10:39:00 AM

Well done winner! l wish I had the talented palate from where you wrote this.

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 12:07:00 PM

What a wonderful comment. Thank you so much Dan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/1/2015 6:27:00 AM

Oh, I really loved this romantic piece James. It is so unique as well as more challenging by making it an acrostic as well! Congratulations on your wonderful win!

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 12:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Connie. I like playing with the form.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/1/2015 3:40:00 AM

Congrats on ur great win James with this awesome write!

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thank you, DR Sharma. I love Etherees, but I can't think of anything to write for the double Etheree contest, OH NO!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 1:57:00 AM

wow, I had no idea this one was yours, Ralph! You did it in a style that it looked like a woman did it. hahaha! And I was wowed that you took it to another level and did it also as an acrostic. Simply divine. BIG congrats in my contest.

James Inman
Date: 10/2/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. Woman, hunnnhh, my feminine side?? I haven't been counting but I've been trying to keep up that one Etheree a week that you suggested. SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME!!! HaHaHa.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/24/2015 3:46:00 PM

James wonderful Etheree. Nice format and excellent choice of words. A real winner.

James Inman
Date: 9/25/2015 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Michael.

Janet Lorenzo

Date: 9/24/2015 2:18:00 PM

Every one would love these very words spoken to them! lovely

James Inman
Date: 9/25/2015 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Janet. I met my wife in October and we were married in October. The words are for her but I'm sure she'd be happy to share them (just the words).

Constance La France

Date: 9/24/2015 11:51:00 AM

James, loving the layout and your words are amazing too 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, like creeping tendrils. ..

James Inman
Date: 9/25/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thanks BW.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/24/2015 11:47:00 AM

This is a lovely poemfull of romance and passion. :) Great write, James

James Inman
Date: 9/24/2015 5:08:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen. I love your visits.