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Our Place, Never Forgotten

You visited my dream With sweet perfection We found our place Waiting for us In each other’s arms Both of us, comforted Love surrounded us Beaming from our hearts When I woke up, The day could not be better The comfort remained Nothing else mattered And I knew inside You will always be there I can feel the beat of your heart Right along with mine Our place, will never be forgotten Heidi Sands 10/10/19

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Date: 10/10/2019 3:02:00 PM
'Our place' - so nicely imagined and realized, Heidi. Wouldn't have 'thunk' it from the title at all. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Gershon :)
Date: 10/10/2019 2:30:00 PM
This is such a joy to read and such a comfort too Heidi. Sadly I seldom dream now, as quite honestly I struggle to sleep, but when such a beautiful dream like this happens - wow, it is so special. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 2:35:00 PM
I am happy to hear it is a joy to read Ann. I don't have nice dreams like this often and do have many nightmares. So, it was special. I hope some nice dreams will come your way. Thank you :)
Date: 10/10/2019 11:27:00 AM
Wonderful write Heidi, amazing when a dream bestows peace that lingers through the day, a gift from above no doubt!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much John. Yes, it is wonderful when dreams can carry on into the next day :)
Date: 10/10/2019 11:17:00 AM
Heidi, I like this poem. Your heart felt place will never be forgotten either. The ace of hearts will always be kind. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 11:28:00 AM
Thank you for being so kind Richard. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 10/10/2019 10:56:00 AM
Wow, Heidi ~ this is a pretty piece with a divine message of hope and love. Love this, my friend...<3
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 11:28:00 AM
That is great to hear HT. Thank you so much. Have a nice day :)
Date: 10/10/2019 10:34:00 AM
I agree with Sunlite below. This was beautifully written my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris. I appreciate your comment on this :)
Date: 10/10/2019 10:31:00 AM
You are consistently enjoyable!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Sunlite. I am happy to hear that today :)

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