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Our Monuments Are Ours.

With precision we carved out the sand here at home, down on your cursed land We defy you to try You will surely fail. Why? We used nothing that looks like your hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/24/2010 6:06:00 PM
Different..Sara
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:21:00 PM
Well deserved second place with this wonderful Limerick Gerard, many congratulations >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:10:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS IN THIS FUN CONTEST*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 3:04:00 AM
Nicely done, Gerard. I would not have thought to use the limerick form here, but you used it to perfection. Congrats on the win. Dan C
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:13:00 PM
a really well metered limerick, Gerard. Nice going in the contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:20:00 PM
Congrtulations Gerald on your #2 worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Gerard
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations Gerard. Great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:50:00 PM
a big win...congrats..clever. BG
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:25:00 PM
Congrats Gerard on your big win in this contest... a wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 9/22/2010 10:57:00 AM
Excellent in both concept and execution, Gerard. The last line is especially compelling! Congratulations on taking second place. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/21/2010 4:58:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Gerard!!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/21/2010 12:21:00 PM
enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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