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Our Friend, the Sun

When morning comes and grass is dewed, one looks beyond the window's view The crimson sky, announces you You spread a warmth, with revelry, You take our breaths, you awe the eyes Old friend, possessor of the sky, you tint each cloud while passing by O' morning friend, O' rising sun…You never fail to come ! Over the rooftops, over my lawn, over the crest of early dawn Warming,………greeting,…………….skimming along……. You come each day, to blush my face, your gentle fingers know the way From morning’s path, long past noon, from east to west, a well worn task You race across the time and space, an ancient clock, while keeping pace And as the twilight comes too soon, you blaze a trail with redder hues And ‘tho I know how soon you’ll go… I wonder why I miss you so…? My brilliant friend, O' setting sun, it’s time to wave a sad farewell I wonder why, when fading dim, you play for me, a sadder song? Yet, still I’m here, in silent awe, to watch you burn away Slowly………fading………………………………………gone _____________________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/20/2013 9:54:00 PM
Carrie, I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:26:00 PM
CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:55:00 PM
Great job..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2012 5:34:00 PM
Carrie - Many congrats to you! - Gail
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:14:00 PM
This is a great poem even without the palindromes. Great work as usual Carrie.
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:19:00 PM
Now here is a good poem regardless of the contest reg's ;) Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:16:00 PM
This is sooooo amazing with its powerful colors and poetic flow....the ending is superb and the question rings true for me as well...you gave the setting sun so much personality, Carrie..that's why you are number one! Enjoyed and a new fav! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:02:00 PM
I wonder WHY this poem has not been placed within top Three?????????????????????????????
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:59:00 PM
It is always hard to write for these contests which have so many constraints and at the same time maintaining the same level of poetic quality.But you are always exceptional.Love this beautiful poem!!
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Outstanding piece. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:20:00 PM
Well done Carrie big congratulations xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 7:41:00 PM
Wonderful job Carrie. I haven't taken the time to enter this one yet. I''m sure you hae a winner. Have you entered Linda Marie's contest yet. I just bit you and she said I was to let you know. Hope I didn't hurt you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/6/2012 11:45:00 AM
What a fabulous tribute to the sun, our "ancient clock." Carrie, I've said it before and I'll say it again, your writing is such a pleasure to read. So consistantly exceptional. Winning wishes for you in David's contest! Love, carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for the well wishes written on my blog..Good luck in the contest..REads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:02:00 PM
carrie, it's not often that i'm impressed but with this poem i am impressed. you kept my attention with your pretty rhymes and the words you chose were the right words. you took us through the entire day without putting us to sleep or making our eyes week. a problem i have been having with certian poets. but if not for this wonderful piece i may have given up. congradulations for any other acollades you may recieve for this wonderful work.JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 4/4/2012 9:12:00 AM
This really has a nice flow to it - I feel like I'm skimming along with you :)
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Date: 4/3/2012 6:15:00 AM
Simply lovely poem !! I've seen the day come and go in this. Great job!!
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