Our Friend, the Sun

When morning comes and grass is dewed, 
one looks beyond the window's view
The crimson sky, announces you
You spread a warmth, with revelry, 
You take our breaths, you awe the eyes
Old friend, possessor of the sky, 
you tint each cloud while passing by
O' morning friend, O' rising sun…You never fail to come !

Over the rooftops, over my lawn, over the crest of early dawn

Warming,………greeting,…………….skimming along…….

You come each day, to blush my face, your gentle fingers know the way
From morning’s path, long past noon, from east to west, a well worn task
You race across the time and space, an ancient clock, while keeping pace

And as the twilight comes too soon, you blaze a trail with redder hues
And ‘tho I know how soon you’ll go… I wonder why I miss you so…?

My brilliant friend, O' setting sun, it’s time to wave a sad farewell
I wonder why, when fading dim, you play for me, a sadder song?

Yet, still I’m here, in silent awe, to watch you burn away

Slowly………fading………………………………………gone
       
                                                                                                                

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Carrie, I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD
A  Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 9:26 PM
CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Great job..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats on your win..Sara
Debole Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Carrie - Many congrats to you! - Gail
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 7:14 PM
This is a great poem even without the palindromes. Great work as usual Carrie.
Guzzi Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Now here is a good poem regardless of the contest reg's ;) Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love
Song Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:16 PM
This is sooooo amazing with its powerful colors and poetic flow....the ending is superb and the question rings true for me as well...you gave the setting sun so much personality, Carrie..that's why you are number one! Enjoyed and a new fav! :) Gwendolen
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:02 PM
I wonder WHY this poem has not been placed within top Three?????????????????????????????
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:59 PM
It is always hard to write for these contests which have so many constraints and at the same time maintaining the same level of poetic quality.But you are always exceptional.Love this beautiful poem!!
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Outstanding piece. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Well done Carrie big congratulations xx
Johnson Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 7:41 PM
Wonderful job Carrie. I haven't taken the time to enter this one yet. I''m sure you hae a winner. Have you entered Linda Marie's contest yet. I just bit you and she said I was to let you know. Hope I didn't hurt you. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:45 AM
What a fabulous tribute to the sun, our "ancient clock." Carrie, I've said it before and I'll say it again, your writing is such a pleasure to read. So consistantly exceptional. Winning wishes for you in David's contest! Love, carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Thanks for the well wishes written on my blog..Good luck in the contest..REads like a winner to me..Sara
Susan Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 9:12 AM
This really has a nice flow to it - I feel like I'm skimming along with you :)
Squyres Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Simply lovely poem !! I've seen the day come and go in this. Great job!!
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