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Open All Night'

Everybody, and his brother
Stopped in, at one time, or another
Not for the greasy hash browns
Or the coffee, with a half a cup, of grounds
They weren't there for Ruby or Ruth
Whose numbers were in the phone booth
At night when the honky tonks closed down
It was the only place open in town

The regulars sat at the back
The bar was reserved for the hacks
Nobody ever stayed very long
A blue plate special or a jukebox song
The burgers were extra greasy
Waitresses a little sleazy
But there were always people around
It was the only place open in town

My mom, warned about it's reputation
My dad, more concerned about damnation
I used to go there, from time to time
Back when a pay phone was just a dime
On occasion wound up in jail
And one might say, I've been through hell
Anything one needed could be found
It was the only place open in town

We saw the smoke, from miles away
Heard the fire trucks, early that day
Everybody not working, went to see
The roaches and the mice run free
When the honky tonks closed that night
Everybody had to go home tight
Cause before the old cafe' burnt down
It was the only place open in town

Looking back, had some good times there
Just sit by the window and stare
Reflections of places and faces
Kinda like a memory, oasis
Life was a whole lot slower
I was a wild oat sower
But anytime, one wanted, to hunker down
It was the only place open in town


   by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/11/2017 7:05:00 PM
A lot of memories in those diners. Your words being lyrics really heighten the nostalgia. One can vividly picture a place just like this in their hometown. Sadly they are disappearing, yet the warmth and fondness live on forever through your wonderful lyrics. Terrific write DT:)
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Date: 2/14/2017 4:17:00 PM
Very nice lyrics Daniel...somehow a Doobie Brothers song popped into my head..
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Date: 12/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
Great write Daniel, can hear the lyric in my head, nice country song, hey send it to Travis Tritt, or Luke Bryan see what happens! Brings back memories of the old diner in town.
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Date: 12/4/2016 8:28:00 AM
Fortunately, the local spot here has not burned down. Come over some time, we'll sip a cuppa and have a big slab of fry-bread loaded with butter and powdered sugar. This one goes to the faves for reminiscing days! cheers 'n chitlins ~ john
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Date: 11/30/2016 10:36:00 PM
You took me back many moons ago... Very charming DT..
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Date: 11/24/2016 11:58:00 AM
You got me singing.It was the only place open in town..Nostalgic and lovely.Really enjoyed it Daniel.
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Date: 11/23/2016 11:53:00 AM
Nice work, sadly, so many of those gathering places once here, have long disappeared and I was nostalgic on the thought.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/23/2016 1:00:00 PM
Not so many here anymore either. It's really quite sad. Thank DH you for dropping by to read and comment. I appreciate your kindness:)
Date: 11/23/2016 2:11:00 AM
Loved this poem, Daniel. A show stopper for sure. Cool lyrics. I got some music running thru the old noggin' right now w/some of the words from this poem. And btw, those waitresses had to be flirty to squeeze some extra tips from the customers, y'know what I'm sayin'. Just the facts of life, right. Charming poem you crafted. Great write. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. Yeah, the Eagles had their sad cafe, Van Gogh had his all night cafe and everybody else had a greasy spoon:) Great memories from the old neighborhood.
Date: 11/22/2016 6:52:00 PM
Daniel..I recall a place similar to this ...after school it was packed with kids ordering coke and fries..on the wall was a sign saying no loitering , wonderful write. I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. Great memories, huh? I think they are some of the best. Small towns are pretty cool:) Thanks for dropping by to share a smile:)
Date: 11/22/2016 12:29:00 PM
this is one grreat gig of wonder.. love your lively kind of reminiscing, daniel... huggs
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, nette. I think every town had a place just like it:)
Date: 11/22/2016 10:26:00 AM
Great one... Glad to hear it... Thanks for sharing...A 7...
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by, Supraja.(In reference to your icon) It's turning colder here, now and the squirrels are very busy. Their nests are high in the trees. I was always told, the higher they build, the harsher the winter. Thanks for sharing a smile:)
Date: 11/22/2016 8:41:00 AM
You've out done yourself with this one!
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:32:00 AM
It is a little long for me. Usually don't have that much to say. Thank you so much Mike. I always enjoy your visits.
Date: 11/22/2016 7:28:00 AM
Reminds me of the P&B Diner where I grew up. Open 24 hours and packed once the bars closed down. Great memories in this one Daniel. Wonderfully written nostalgia.
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:31:00 AM
Yeah, Chris. Every town has one. Nasty, terrible food, loud but it's the only place open and everybody goes there to socialize. Thank you for your support:)
Date: 11/22/2016 6:23:00 AM
This was such a memorable read Danny, I felt as though I had been in that cafe at one time or another. "I was a wild oat sower" put a huge smile on my face whilst reading! :) You bad boy, you...7+
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Paloma. So glad you liked it:) It was a dirty job but somebody had to do it. I love your friendly visits.
Date: 11/22/2016 6:09:00 AM
Nostalgic write, Danny. Your rhyming is great and so are your memories...even the feisty ones. Thanks for sharing a bit of your younger days.
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Lin. Can't say it's all true but it is based on memory of an all night cafe where I grew up. I am thrilled to have you as a guest. Really great to see you:)
Date: 11/22/2016 1:26:00 AM
Loved this descriptive piece, Daniel. This line made me smile, though: I was a wild oat sower....really? ;) That's some line. Enjoyed this piece. Hugs
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Eileen. Isn't that what I was? I appreciate your kind comments and always enjoy your visits:)
Date: 11/22/2016 12:07:00 AM
Lovely ... A lovely window ...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/22/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Probir:)
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