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Poetry/Terzanelle/Only Son
Copyright Protected, 11-1599-403-21
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 21, 2023
For the International Contest, God's Only Son
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged, 12/25/2023

Fourth Place

"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have everlasting life." John 3:16, The Bible At Christmas, we will remember God's son, Jesus ... born in a stable- on the hay; God gave him- until his mission was done ! I love the Christmas lights and the songs gay, at Christmas people will show a kindness; Jesus ... born in a stable- on the hay ! Jesus healed people with faith and blindness, it did not matter to him who you were; at Christmas people will show a kindness ! The church is lit up with candles that stir, we know his selfless story and ending; it did not matter to him who you were ! All his days filled with healing and mending, and then God said enough- oh, what a death; we know his selfless story and ending ! The sky black with thunder at his last breath, at Christmas, we will remember God's son; and then God said enough- oh, what a death, God gave him- until his mission was done !

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Date: 12/27/2023 11:16:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Have a prosperous New Year! God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2023 4:45:00 AM
Beata, thank you for the comment, blessings
Date: 12/25/2023 10:02:00 PM
Gorgeous Christmas poem my dear poet friend Constance. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. I love it. Merry Christmas! I wish you and your family all the BEST that this season offers. God bless! Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2023 1:06:00 PM
Len, thank you so much for the compliment, congratulations and the comment, blessings and hugs
Date: 12/25/2023 2:20:00 PM
Very nice, Constance! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2023 1:07:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 12/25/2023 3:43:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you this Christmas. love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2023 1:07:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment, love and blessings
Date: 11/22/2023 5:51:00 PM
That’s a wonderful Christmas Terzanelle poem Constance, “at Christmas, we will remember God's son” ~ Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2023 3:32:00 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings
Date: 11/22/2023 2:32:00 PM
a simply lovely poem that lovingly and accurately depicts the life of Christ and the true nature of Christmas. I found your poem inspirational as well. Must fave...have a splendid evening & Thanksgiving, Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2023 3:32:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, and the FAV, blessings
Date: 11/22/2023 8:34:00 AM
A lovely write. Would make a great Christmas card. Good Luck... Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2023 1:22:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment, many more lines to write, blessings
Date: 11/21/2023 5:04:00 PM
Thanks for the message while we wait. :-) I wanted to congratulate you on having three poems published in the latest Poetry Soup Anthology, Constance! YEAH !!!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2023 1:21:00 PM
Bill, thank you so much for the comment, I am still working on the poem hoping to have it finished today, thanks for the congratulations on my 3 published poems, blessings

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