Victor Buhagiar Poet Verse

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Only One Cared

The dilapidated chapel tolled its dirge.
Inside an old woman lay in a coffin.

No mourners came to pay their respects.
So easily forgotten by those
Who needed her most in days of old,
All relatives who should know better.
Now they had no money to inherit.
So they had long dismissed her from her needs.
Except for one who was her carer
And felt such pity to see her go.

Alone she lay there.
Death is irrevocable.
A poor woman gone
Hardly a decent coffin.
Let the small bells toll.


Not for the contest

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Valsa George November 30, 2021 at 4:55 AM A sad scene you have depicted so touchingly poignant, Victor ! Such incidents are not uncommon !

Sara Kendrick October 16, 2021 at 3:43 AM Ahh!! So sad but that is the way it is sometimes with the woman of the home. She gives and gives but no one wants to give back. Have you ever read the book "The Giving Tree"? It is a child's book that so applies to life. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Eve Roper October 15, 2021 at 7:44 PM such a sad time in her life, but it does happen

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2021 at 1:58 PM - A picture of the truth ... a thoughtful writing ... sad but from reality, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paulette Calasibetta October 14, 2021 at 4:54 PM Victor, you have poetically captured the ravages of aging..... Take Care, Paulette

Judy Ball October 14, 2021 at 12:49 PM Such a deeply touching piece with a very important message. The picture was perfect. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues October 14, 2021 at 12:00 PM Poor in death…hopefully she inherited heaven.

Unseeking Seeker October 14, 2021 at 7:28 AM Food for thought … let’s pause to reflect on the true state of our consciousness

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 14, 2021 at 6:51 AM This stirring poem holds a sad truth for many. But when all other family is absent, the heavenly Father is still present. Kindest regards, Evelyn

Sotto Poet October 14, 2021 at 6:44 AM This Gem moved me on multiple levels, and I could relate to some of the emotions felt. This truly saddened me. We were conveyed to the burial as a result of your detailed clues. God Bless the souls of the departed.

Joanna Daniel October 14, 2021 at 3:42 AM Sad state that tugs at the heart strings, Victor:)

Lisa Ricci October 14, 2021 at 2:28 AM Oh Victor - I found this utterly sad. I also found this to have truth for some. With your vivid words you place us in the scene at the grave site. Bless the departed. Thank you for sharing. Have a beautiful afternoon. Blessings always.

Karen Jones October 14, 2021 at 1:32 AM This is so sad. But the one soul is cause for a heart to be lifted. This poem reflects life people and death very well. Great way to advocate Victor.

Beryl Edmonds October 14, 2021 at 1:19 AM So sad Victor, people should be loved for who they are and not for what they’ve got. An excellent write for something that happens all too often… Belle

James Marshall Goff October 13, 2021 at 10:58 PM I know this all too well, Victor, a fine lament...