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Poem of the day - 19/2/2022

With his first touch our galaxy became an orchestra, I quivered as waves of ecstasy took possession of me, I felt I was no more in control of what was to be, I heard voices of celestial beings, Galactic sounds turned the heavens into an opera, Angels misty, joyful tears stirring constellations, Each one delivering an electrifying sensation, Arousing my psyche, mind, spirit and soul. The night enveloped us in a sheet of moonlit satin, Caressing us, millions of stars cascading, Sprinkling star dust upon us which glowed Like fireflies, the milky way seemed to be slipping Down, slithering across the sky, Whilst the moon, other planets and solar systems Collided, pyrotechnics illuminated the sky, A deafening symphony tickling my heart cords. Intoxicated and spent, gazed into his expressive, Loving, fathomless, fawn brown eyes, Such an encompassing ecstatic connection, A togetherness of merging into one, Sealed with a passionate kiss, Filled with life-long promises, In awe, Planet Earth trembled beneath us, One wondrous night, of many more to come.

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Date: 5/31/2022 12:25:00 AM
i would like to thank all my wonderful poetic friends, for your awesome comments, please forgive me for not answering you all one by one for your truly remarkable comments. Time is not on my side with running a business also, Bless you all, hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 3/3/2022 3:23:00 PM
Quite a harmonic moment between two people, beneath the heavens. Lovely imagery.
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Date: 2/28/2022 2:06:00 PM
Ahhh!! Glad it was POTD. It is so passionate and romantic. Thank you for your visit to my pages a few days ago. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2022 3:12:00 PM
Awesome, truly breath taking! I see this was a POTD, and for good reason! It is beautiful! Congratulations on the honor you received on this fantastic write <3 ~BJ
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Date: 2/24/2022 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful in so many ways. Congrats, Jennifer. ~Eric
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Date: 2/24/2022 8:36:00 PM
You have merged with the cosmos, Jennifer!!... How 'on earth' did I miss this delightful POTD?!... Belated congratulations, richly deserved. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 2/24/2022 12:51:00 AM
Your happiness explodes in ecstasy within each line Alexis. This romantic poem is so deserving of the honor of POTD my friend. Congratulations! I am saving this gem to my Faves. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/23/2022 3:57:00 PM
Oh what a nice romantic write that makes you feel the love in the air. Love your poem. Blessing phyl
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Date: 2/22/2022 4:03:00 PM
very awesomely descriptive. one of your BEST, Jennifer. oh and congrats on POTD
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Date: 2/21/2022 11:12:00 PM
So happy for you Jennifer on this wonderful and well deserved POTD. I'm proud of you for this awesome write!
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:46:00 PM
This is one of the best poems I read recently ! It has such a surreal feel. Congratulations Jennifer on your much deserved POTD. This I am Faving !
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Date: 2/21/2022 6:33:00 PM
"our galaxy became an orchestra" . . . And I'm sure the melody was simply breathtaking. Your words leave me in complete awe, my dear friend. This is beautiful, magical and filled with so much passion. Congratulations Jennifer, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/21/2022 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Fully deserve it my friend
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Date: 2/21/2022 2:11:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD, Jennifer, This was a well deserved win. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/21/2022 1:09:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/21/2022 12:57:00 PM
Jennifer, wonderfully romantic, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/21/2022 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 2/21/2022 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Wonderful" write. I love this one. Love your line, "With his first touch our galaxy became an orchestra," And It Did. Have a blessed day/week........................
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Date: 2/21/2022 9:50:00 AM
Jenni hearty congratulations on your POTD honor with this lovely write... "stars sprinkling starry dust... Milky Way slipping down slithering across the sky... "... Beautiful lines... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:54:00 AM
What a magical love story, Jennifer, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:52:00 AM
Ahh, a contest winner for sure! I loved every single line. Congratulations on POTD, and write on, fine poet :)
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:48:00 AM
Jennifer, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations Jennifer on a cosmic POTD, It’s like the Big Bang happened all over again, only much faster this time around, sensual writing, cheers David
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:03:00 AM
A wondrous start to a life filled with Love; beautifully described in romantic language. A well-deserved POTD. Congratulations, Jennifer. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 2/21/2022 7:27:00 AM
Passion and romance abound in your beautiful POTD! Jennifer, The ecstasy that you convey is rare and oh so breathtaking !
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