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One To One Contest

On my own Is the name of a song i walk that path It is a sad one No one to hold No lips to kiss No one to share A time of bliss Love is the theme I need to share Reach out to touch No one is there What should I do To find such a friend To share the joys That this life brings I need to smile My face to light up Love in my eyes A kiss on my lips I look to the sky Please I beg you Send me my wish So one can be two.

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/1/2013 2:45:00 AM

When I commented before I didn't realize this was for the contest...VERY difficult thing to do but you pulled it off very nicely - Congrats, my friend...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2013 9:30:00 PM

Seren, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD

Heather Ober

Date: 1/28/2013 9:58:00 AM

This is such a sweet poem. Congrats on your HM! Well deserved! :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/28/2013 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Heather....Seren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/27/2013 11:31:00 PM

Wish for happiness and you will have it all. Kudos on your win!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/28/2013 1:58:00 PM

I wish for many things, lol i think they have all got muddled up somewhere.....Seren

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2013 3:13:00 PM

congrats on your HM Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/28/2013 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Joseph ......Seren

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/27/2013 1:07:00 PM

There is such a melancholy feel to this lovely poem.........and all done with one word stanzas!! Well done!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/28/2013 2:00:00 PM

Hello Cartie nice to see you. nice to have a HM. am pleased....Seren

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/27/2013 12:37:00 PM

congratulations seren....

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/28/2013 2:00:00 PM

thank you Mehnaz

David Williams

Date: 1/27/2013 12:19:00 PM

Seren congrats on your HM, I hope you get your wish....David

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/28/2013 2:02:00 PM

What will be will be Dafydd .......Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/10/2013 12:09:00 AM

Seren this is sheer magic.. "I need to smile" that stanza is amazing.. you are bringing heaps of happiness here to soup with these wonders... hope that makes you happy too

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 7:10:00 PM

Thanks Harry I am fine.....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2013 10:24:00 PM

Sorry I am seeing these so late, Seren. I like this one a lot. Now let me see this other one you are wondering about.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/9/2013 10:56:00 PM

Thanks for stopping and commentng ...Seren

Joe Flach

Date: 1/9/2013 1:34:00 PM

Serene - I see just one in this one as well. One syllable and one train of thought - that one would be better as two. Maybe the nexst contest will be only two syllable words - now, that you have mastered this one. Good job. Joe

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/9/2013 2:27:00 PM

thanks Joe i wrote two of them if you care to look at my one to one two didnt know which to enter lol.

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/8/2013 6:18:00 PM

I echo these words.. !! Touched my heart !! Best of luck for the contest. An interesting challenge he put forth, but you did an excellent job !!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/8/2013 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Debra, was fun trying to use just one syllable words, muttered a bit under my breadth as well lol...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/8/2013 3:50:00 PM

You rose to the challenge and conquered with this amazing write! I truly loved reading this lovely and harmonious poem this afternoon! What an outstanding and stupendous piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/8/2013 4:17:00 PM

conquer is a strong word Russell... scraped through is more appropriate lol ...Seren

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/8/2013 3:26:00 PM

Tough job but an excellent one .... Loved and enjoyed reading ....love , Mehnaz

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/8/2013 4:16:00 PM

thank you Mehnaz .....Seren

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/8/2013 2:46:00 PM

What a lovely write, Seren! You had a challenge in using one syllable words and you rose to the occasion in s style! I hope your wish comes true! I enjoyed reading this so very much. God bless!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/8/2013 4:16:00 PM

thx Eileen, its rather strange having to think around using more than one syllable...Seren

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/8/2013 2:04:00 PM

Love the beautiful simplicity of this, Seren...no wasted words... the song 'On my own' makes me weak in the knees every time I hear it - Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/8/2013 2:14:00 PM

hello Tim. This contest i could only use one syllable words, not so easy. Yes i love that song also. Thanks for stopping and commenting...Seren