One More Day

Separate pixels of personal intrepidation ^ a paradise of unpredictability pieces pulling left in adoration or is it sublimation where spirits cried anchoring my own anchor eyes daunted in disguise picking out that prized possession ~ dangling sinking ^ reaching out for you reaching out for me teaching the beats to steady cuz you don't know but I don't know where angels hide their wings in storms that never cease killing dreams and stealing comprehension take away ^ just a little part of scribbles lying through pain pushing off fear and apprehension for at least one more day

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/5/2017 8:43:00 AM

Hello Tim. yes it is a great song. She sang it well. Have a great day my day my friend.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/28/2017 1:11:00 PM

What a great song. No one knows what our path is like it is for us to walk alone and find our way. love phyl

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/25/2017 11:32:00 AM

I read this last night, you chose a great song to go with this gem of a poem. I hadn't heard her before, she has a great voice too!

Chuck Melugin

Date: 8/25/2017 10:53:00 AM

Tim....Only a wordsmith could write this and I read again and again as I struggle with the same. 7+ my best to you, chuck

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/24/2017 7:32:00 PM

Walking alone means your mind is in thinking mode. Guess you were walking alone when you wrote this. ...great write ....Seren

Lin Lane

Date: 8/24/2017 4:45:00 PM

This is filled with several paths. We just need to take the one best for us. Not all angels have wings..just the spiritual ones. Fine writing, Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2017 3:21:00 PM

- A deep touching poem, Tim - .... "at least one more day" ... no goodbye, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/24/2017 1:03:00 PM

Deep! Unpredictability, fear, apprehension!!

Darren White

Date: 8/24/2017 11:57:00 AM

Love it my friend, very much

Tim Smith
Date: 8/24/2017 12:10:00 PM

Thanks so much Darren. It means a lot to me.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2017 10:07:00 AM

I find such sadness in this poem and want to give encouragement to hang on, one step at a time.

Tim Smith
Date: 8/24/2017 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Heidi. This is about how we all take away what we need from a poem. It speaks to us in different ways depending on what we are going through at that time.