One Halloween

One Halloween, darkness was descending.
I saw a graveyard, and then walking fast,
I felt the gloom of something bad impending.
The tombstones’ silhouettes that I walked past
were creepy! I decided then to run.
But in the dark, I failed to see a hole,
and when I fell, my great dread had begun.
Terror like I’d never known filled my soul,
for I had landed in an open grave.
I scrambled to get out, but felt the touch
of something living! Being not so brave,
I hollered like a baby – scared so much
I ran like the devil was chasing me.
From who or what – I wonder – did I flee?

Oct. 29, 2022
For Emile Pinet's "Halloween" Poetry Contest
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Pachecho Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 9:13 PM
I like your style. Interesting, captivating and climbing.
Gasun Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Such a delightful scary halloween story-poem my dear friend Andrea. I enjoyed reading it this evening. Congratulations on your win and this brilliant piece. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
George Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Falling into an open grave, that too on a Halloween day must have been a dreadful experience. Thank God the living presence inside it didn't chase and drink your blood ! :) Congratulations Andrea on your win !
Flood Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:51 AM
I reckon falling in an open grave, in the dark, on Halloween would just about tip one over the edge. But when some ‘thing’ grabs your ankle… that’s wee wee time. ;-) enjoyed this, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Terry
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:39 AM
The devil made me do it. ;) Clever write Andrea! Congratulations on your win! :)
Pinet Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my Halloween contest, this contest was all in fun. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
Bayles Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 6:43 PM
This is a very nice, haunting poem, Andrea.
Hawley Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 11:01 AM
Good luck in this contest.
Walker Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Well written frightful Halloween poem. I am not going to be able to have a good nights sleep.
Stebbings Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 3:53 AM
Dark humour here, Andrea, in this Halloween horror story. Enjoyed. // Barry
Proxenos Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Dark placed, scary stories of ghosts in cemeteries and vampires, build up in us and we run for our lives as far away as we can. Really caught and captured my attention did this one. Andrea I have had my first book of poems published with Amazon Kindle - Tea Break Poems, please ignore the Smashwords edition because it went in erroneously before it was edited in 2021. Hugs and Blessings Jennifer
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 1:03 PM
oh, I am reading this now and seeing what happened. BIG congrats, Jennifer. I bet you are over the moon.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Scarry poem. Evil always pursuits us but there is grace to save us. Hugs.
Horsman Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 11:38 PM
Hope not from my poetry, Andrea. Love the scary poetry, you do them so well. Harry.
Hinshaw Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 2:08 PM
Enjoyed your write, Andrea - you've got a winner here for sure - Bob H
Theraven Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Andrea, Yes, 'tis the season of giving (frightful tales). So eerie when the ground opens and grabs you like a trapdoor spider., love it. Happy Halloween! -Richard
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Well, I guess you supernaturally got out. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Leffanta Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 11:53 AM
"Nothing but fear itself"? Aloha!
Slaughter Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Well, Andrea...I don't think I'd stick around to find out, either! This is a spine-tingler.
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