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One Halloween

One Halloween, darkness was descending. I saw a graveyard, and then walking fast, I felt the gloom of something bad impending. The tombstones’ silhouettes that I walked past were creepy! I decided then to run. But in the dark, I failed to see a hole, and when I fell, my great dread had begun. Terror like I’d never known filled my soul, for I had landed in an open grave. I scrambled to get out, but felt the touch of something living! Being not so brave, I hollered like a baby – scared so much I ran like the devil was chasing me. From who or what – I wonder – did I flee? Oct. 29, 2022 For Emile Pinet's "Halloween" Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/21/2022 9:13:00 PM
I like your style. Interesting, captivating and climbing.
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Date: 12/1/2022 8:20:00 AM
Such a delightful scary halloween story-poem my dear friend Andrea. I enjoyed reading it this evening. Congratulations on your win and this brilliant piece. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 11/30/2022 8:14:00 PM
Falling into an open grave, that too on a Halloween day must have been a dreadful experience. Thank God the living presence inside it didn't chase and drink your blood ! :) Congratulations Andrea on your win !
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Date: 11/30/2022 10:51:00 AM
I reckon falling in an open grave, in the dark, on Halloween would just about tip one over the edge. But when some ‘thing’ grabs your ankle… that’s wee wee time. ;-) enjoyed this, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Date: 11/30/2022 10:39:00 AM
The devil made me do it. ;) Clever write Andrea! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 11/30/2022 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my Halloween contest, this contest was all in fun. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 11/1/2022 6:43:00 PM
This is a very nice, haunting poem, Andrea.
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Date: 10/31/2022 11:01:00 AM
Good luck in this contest.
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Date: 10/31/2022 8:31:00 AM
Well written frightful Halloween poem. I am not going to be able to have a good nights sleep.
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Date: 10/31/2022 3:53:00 AM
Dark humour here, Andrea, in this Halloween horror story. Enjoyed. // Barry
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Date: 10/30/2022 3:44:00 AM
Dark placed, scary stories of ghosts in cemeteries and vampires, build up in us and we run for our lives as far away as we can. Really caught and captured my attention did this one. Andrea I have had my first book of poems published with Amazon Kindle - Tea Break Poems, please ignore the Smashwords edition because it went in erroneously before it was edited in 2021. Hugs and Blessings Jennifer
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Date: 11/1/2022 1:03:00 PM
oh, I am reading this now and seeing what happened. BIG congrats, Jennifer. I bet you are over the moon.
Date: 10/30/2022 2:03:00 AM
Scarry poem. Evil always pursuits us but there is grace to save us. Hugs.
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Date: 10/29/2022 11:38:00 PM
Hope not from my poetry, Andrea. Love the scary poetry, you do them so well. Harry.
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Date: 10/29/2022 2:08:00 PM
Enjoyed your write, Andrea - you've got a winner here for sure - Bob H
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Date: 10/29/2022 1:03:00 PM
Andrea, Yes, 'tis the season of giving (frightful tales). So eerie when the ground opens and grabs you like a trapdoor spider., love it. Happy Halloween! -Richard
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Date: 10/29/2022 12:27:00 PM
Well, I guess you supernaturally got out. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/29/2022 11:53:00 AM
"Nothing but fear itself"? Aloha!
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Date: 10/29/2022 11:32:00 AM
Well, Andrea...I don't think I'd stick around to find out, either! This is a spine-tingler.
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