On Wings- POTD

For a time, I want to shed my earthly existence Like the sloughed skin of a snake To rise high and still higher like a bird To sail beyond sunset, to fly far, far away To soar into the seamless skies To levitate in ether, to feel weightless To float amid twinkling stars To collide against constellations To tour round on a magic carpet And dive into the oceanic depths of space There I would build a palace Amid the clouds to dream in peace With none to trouble or torment No laws of gravity should pull me down Let me rest awhile in that magic kingdom Not for ever, but for a little while To look down from that cosmic arena And pity upon the poor earthlings Who never realize how insignificant they are Stuck in a blue luminous speck Amid the vast enveloping cosmic dark And keep sucking their habitation dry! With all ignorance and misconceptions shed With pearls of new knowledge garnered With petty strife set aside, in greater humility Finally to descend down as a better being! May.31.2022 Poem Of the Day- June .1.2022 ~Third Place Winner~ Resubmittecd for Marathon Mile.17. Poetry Contest Sonsor- Mark Toney Flight Poetry Contest Sponsor- Chantelle Anne Cooke
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Fenn Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 4:26 PM
Beautiful poem Valsa. Congrats on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 4:00 PM
I am so happy to see this favorite poem receive a podium win Valsa. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
Ray Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 1:11 PM
all of our flights of fancy should land us herein....good job, great imagery
Agustin Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 9:57 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, wisely instructing me to soar toward doing what is good. God bless you.
George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 9:32 PM
Beata, I honor your words and appreciate them much ! Thanks a lot ....
Seeker Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest, Valsa! God bless
George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Thanks a lot dear noble friend ....
Ashley Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 6:13 PM
Dear Valsa, I adore the soaring spirit of your exquisite poem. Your thought provoking imagery coaxes emotions and realizations from inner depths to rise to the surface where they are free to fly and dream and gain perspective from that “cosmic arena”; “And pity upon the poor earthlings / Who never realize how insignificant they are” - I relish the humbling beauty of your profound poetry. Your last line a grand finale indeed! Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle’s contest and for POTD honors.. both so richly deserved. Warmest wishes, my friend .. ~Susan
George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 9:28 PM
Susan, once more the flow of your sweet words inundate me. I enjoy reading your comment so much. Along with you I remember a few other names who share your gift of words and am ever grateful to them.... who analyse poems and write beautiful critiques, who raise me from levels ordinary to realms lofty! Thank you so much dear sweet Susan....
Goldsmith Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on this New win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day writing away.................
George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 9:23 PM
Thank you so much Paula .... ! Stay blessed dear one !
Kauffman Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Valsa, this is magic on wings from a bird's eye view. So many beautiful, and original, phrases - "palace among the clouds" just to name one. You have a way of putting words together that creates vibrant memorable images of poetic wonder. And, I love your last line, your desire, to use this soaring experience of new perspective to make you a better person inviting us to do the same. Congratulations on your POTD. May you have many more! Blessings my friend!
George Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 3:22 AM
I am on cloud nine by your comment though I don't deserve so much . Great people make others feel great...! May God bless you! I am always pained to see our beautiful earth being exploited and devastated by selfish human beings without any thought for the posterity. Our earth will soon be left unlivable. Here life turns miserable day by day ! How can our crimes be atoned... ! Thank you so much Sam for your uplifting words of praise....
La France Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Valsa, beautifully created, I love your poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
George Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 3:10 AM
So nice of you Constance ! Thanks for your kind visit and comment !
Meadows Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:29 PM
Well done. Congratulations on your POTD.
George Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Thanks a lot Jeanette for your kind visit and comment !
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Let your imagination take you there. (Anything is possible in a poem) In a dream. I enjoy gliding on clouds, feeling the wind beneath my wings. This is so beautiful and uplifting, Valsa. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:43 PM
Brandy, your smiling face i see often in most of the POTDs and your wonderful comments beneath. I enjoy reading them for the sheer beauty of it. Thanks a lot Brandy for your sweet comment
Watt Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:43 PM
How delighted I am to see you receive a POTD for this gem, dear Valsa! Keep writing and inspiring, my friend ~ John
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:39 PM
You have delighted me so much by your enthusiastic applause dear John. I owe you much gratitude....
Lawrence Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:11 PM
Just beautiful Valsa ! I would like to journey to that sacred magical place with you …. To dive into the oceanic depths of space . I love the entirety of this as it shows the depth of your heart and soul. Congratulations on POTD! Blessings to you and hugs, Susan :)
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:37 PM
The places you create in your imagination are much more lovely Susan.... ! I am a fan of your poems. Thank you so much for your appreciative comment !
Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:37 PM
My congratulations dear Valsa for your POTD.
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:35 PM
This second visit is much appreciated. Thanks a lot Victor !
Kauffman Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your POTD! Through your adventure soaring in the "elysian bliss" you come back to earth with a prayer on your lips to be a "better person" from this experience - truly a wonderful desire for all of us. Very touching ending to your day of flight!!! Best wishes for the contest! High fives and three cheers for this honor!!
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Sam.... this lovely comment from you is much appreciated . Thanks for your analytical evaluation of my poem.
Mcconnell Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:45 AM
I'm back again Valsa, congratulations on being POTD. Blessings,Gordon
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much Gordon for your second visit !
Gorelick Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:32 AM
Yes, to shed all sorrow and grief and soar off to elysian bliss--Wonderful. Congratulations on POTD!
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Yes, soaring to Elysian bliss on wings of imagination.....Thanks you so much Robert .... !
Anaya Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:17 AM
A flight to magic lands, an enchanting poem. Congratulations on your POTD, Valsa! Have wonderful Day!
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Appreciate your delightful comment.... ! Thanks a lot Anaya
Peck Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your beautiful POTD! "to sail beyond sunset" ~ so gorgeous!
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Oh.... so delighted! Thanks a lot Ann
Wolf Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Congrats on POTD, Valsa! Fly high to Heaven's sky -- return humbled and a better guy! Lovely thought. :) gw
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:57 AM
Love the idea.... but can only wish ! Thank you dear Gershon
Baker Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Back to congratulate you for your POTD, Valsa. Enjoy the honor! Beautiful poem! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Thanks once more dear Bill ! Have a beautiful day !
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day.................
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:54 AM
Paula... much grateful to you dear poet friend
May Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 6:23 AM
"A palace amid the clouds to dream in peace", Wonderful write Valsa, Congrats on POTD
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Thank you much Joseph for your encouragement and congratulation.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations for POTD Valsa :)
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Heidi.... many thanks !
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:40 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Thank you much Kim....
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