On The Verge

Wishes lost to time will never come true, till the impossible becomes the norm, and the universe recognizes you, not as the thirsty flower, but the storm! Life's allotted time swiftly disappears, as yesterdays outnumber tomorrows. And having cried over a billion tears, hope starts to drown in a sea of sorrows. Can wishes and dreams ever be real, like a pot of gold under each rainbow? and if you believe, will you get to feel God's love—will it miraculously show? It's hard to pursue a fantasy dream, when teetering on the verge of a scream!
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Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Well penned, Emile. Congrats on your top win.
Pinet Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Thanks Line ,you always have my back my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:39 PM
I have often thought this, but you were the first to actually write it down for me: "Do magic wishes ever become real is there a pot of gold for each rainbow?" Well done, Emile. So wonderful!
Pinet Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Lane Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Dreams can and do come true, Emile. The 'reality bites' version takes place when the dream becomes a nightmare, and then it is possible to drown in sorrow. Your lines, "And the universe recognizes you not as the thirsty flower, but the storm!"...brilliant!
Pinet Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thank you so much Lin, I enjoyed your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Well written Emile. I bet many can relate to this :)
Pinet Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Heidi, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Yeah Emile I know what you mean, nice write, excellent sonnet!
Pinet Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thank very much John, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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