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(Him) Say babe, how'd you like to go out with me? (Me) Sure but I can tell you're married to your reflection! 05~03~15 Contest: Judy Konos Your best pick up Line ~awarded a 1st place~

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Abdul Malik

Date: 5/6/2015 10:10:00 AM

Narcissism at its best. Congrats Jan.

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2015 10:02:00 AM

Jan :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:25:00 AM

Jan, good one. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

Joseph May

Date: 5/6/2015 6:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2015 7:12:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lei Strauss

Date: 5/6/2015 3:36:00 AM

HAHAH! This made my day Jan! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2015 4:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by Lei:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/6/2015 1:56:00 AM

Bet he has mirrored furniture, oops hmmm i have ....oh my ......Seren ...... Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2015 2:06:00 AM

LOL Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/5/2015 9:12:00 PM

LOL Thank you for being in my contest

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2015 1:32:00 AM

It was a great idea - thanks fro bringing fun into soup I read some very funny poems:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2015 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations! Well deserved Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2015 1:32:00 AM

Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/5/2015 5:19:00 PM

Hey, I resent that! I'm married to my reflection too (But we're getting a divorce) You're a funny lady my friend! Congrats - Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 5:23:00 PM

lol Tim:-) thanks for the lovely comment - despite all the trauma I have had in my life since I started writing i have always tried to write with humour when I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2015 5:07:00 PM

Loved this one and how you put that picture with it. BIG congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 5:09:00 PM

The guy reminds me of someone I know Andrea so I had to go with the pic - was really pleased to place so well there were a lot of humourous winners lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/5/2015 4:26:00 PM

Not sure how I missed this the first time but it is adorable...Those men who are married to their reflections will never love anyone half as much as themselves! Congrats on a first!!~janet

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 4:40:00 PM

Aww thanks for all your support I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2015 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 4:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/3/2015 2:12:00 PM

7 , another good poem :~)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 2:14:00 PM

Thanks so much for your support Eve:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 5/3/2015 2:04:00 PM

Pop stars and footballers are so like this, so my daughter tells me. Good luck in the contest Jan, hugs // James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 2:14:00 PM

Oh I can imagine James just so in love with themselves:-( Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/3/2015 1:26:00 PM

Funny and often true. Good luck in the contest! Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 1:28:00 PM

so so true but women can be vain too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/3/2015 9:17:00 AM

You are on a roll Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 12:27:00 PM

I do love to try and entertain with my writing Richard - it may not be technically brilliant but as long as I make people smile and forget their worries for a while that is the most important thing to me:-)Hugs Jan xx

John Williams

Date: 5/3/2015 6:16:00 AM

Very funny Jan-can't date a married man. Kind regards---John

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 6:17:00 AM

Thanks John lol:-) Hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/3/2015 1:56:00 AM

Ooh, good one! Best of luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 4:51:00 AM

Thanks ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2015 1:35:00 AM

GREAT job, Jan and I LOVED the picture to go with it.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 4:50:00 AM

Oh me too Andrea he's a bit like someone I know:-( hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 5/2/2015 11:29:00 PM

Hahaha...hilarious. #7. Great pic too. But seriously, many suffer from NPD (narcissistic personality disorder). But please don't pull out the other entry on writing a phone book. That was brilliant too.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 4:50:00 AM

I've pulled the phone number one went for this instead lol - may be a mistake but this is fun:-) Hugs jan xx

Wally Flint

Date: 5/2/2015 9:19:00 PM

Cute! Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 4:49:00 AM

Thanks Wally:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/2/2015 8:40:00 PM

wow, I was thinking of the exact same song!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 8:42:00 PM

I was listening to it and this came to me so i had to make it into a contest entry - just hope it is funny enough for Judy:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/2/2015 8:23:00 PM

I need no reflection to say , this is hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 8:28:00 PM

ha ha ha - the song 'your so vain I bet you thought this 'poem' was about you' sprang to mind lol:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/2/2015 8:09:00 PM

LOL!hahaha...that's the humour! true grit of the Brit! Loved it Jan! A perfect 7! Hugs! :-) Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 8:42:00 PM

Loved your poem Kim came from the heart - i was thinking of writing on a similar theme:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 8:10:00 PM

I pulled the other one I had written have gone with this one instead:-) Hugs jan xx