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''on broken wings''



sad
my soul
weeping heart
I have been hurt
oh how deep the dagger plunges and twists
I am staggered by the hate and the love
within I bleed
oh sadness
this girl
weeps 
tears
falling
and I write
I pen the pain
sad verses fly away on broken wings  . . . 


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May 25, 2015


Triple Tetractys

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Date: 7/2/2016 5:23:00 PM
So heartfelt and so well written a 7 Hugs
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Date: 5/5/2016 9:47:00 PM
You do sadness so beautifully, Constance. I typed in your name and this poem came up!! How are you tonight? I'm off to make fajitas now. have a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 6/11/2015 11:39:00 AM
Wow... um that's sad , and good I guess this poem talks about your wings right? But its good I give it a 6
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/20/2016 1:29:00 PM
abdiel, thanks for visiting, my soul is hurt ....
Date: 6/4/2015 7:21:00 AM
Jan, the catharsis of poetic release is summed up beautifully in the last line of this poem..."sad verses fly away on broken wings". It is even more poignant in meaning as it reflects your poetic pseudonym.
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/20/2016 1:30:00 PM
John, thanks so much for your wonderful comment , appreciate ...
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Dear Heart
Date: 6/4/2015 8:05:00 AM
I know you mean broken wings
Date: 5/25/2015 11:24:00 AM
Gripping poem with interesting form and utterly beautiful last line that keeps me thinking about the subject!
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Date: 5/25/2015 8:27:00 AM
Love the last line. Beautiful poem. 7
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:20:00 AM
That was quite beautiful.
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