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Oh the Limerence

I saw the man from a distance watching, His brown eyes filled me with carnal delight; We exchanged amorous glances- exciting. It would be a wild dream to kiss him tonight, That voice was so deep and quite marvelous; His brown eyes filled me with carnal desire. I bet his kisses would be wonderfully delicious, He asked if he could sit and got me a herbal tea; That voice was so deep and quite marvelous. When he touched me- I was floating in the sea, Oh, wouldn't it be a romantic, sinful adventure; He asked if he could sit and got me herbal tea. His arms holding me- a real desire quencher, I was drifting in a sweet euphoric state of mind; Oh, wouldn't it be a romantic, sinful adventure. His arms holding me- a real desire quencher, I saw the man from a distance watching; I was drifting in a sweet euphoric state of mind, We exchanged amorous glances- exciting. ______________________________ July 12 , 2016 Poetry/Terzanelle/Oh The Limerence Copyright Protected, ID 16-808-265-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the Premier contest, Limerence Sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron Fourth Place

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Date: 7/21/2016 6:58:00 PM
Broken Wings, what a beautiful poem you have written with such deep and raw emotions...congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:23:00 PM
Shower please lol...enjoyed Wings...glic...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:09:00 PM
....and I've not even had tea with you yet :) A lovely Terzanelle, BW, it will do well. Viv x
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:37:00 PM
Exciting and refreshing - loved the raw desire displayed here. Another great example of your skill as a writer! High expectation for the contest. Jesse
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:32:00 PM
captivating write, constance... you make me drool, wow!..huggs and soupie
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Date: 7/13/2016 2:59:00 AM
Excellent. beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:24:00 PM
This is an interesting style and your words create a vision that is both sensual and exotically erotic at the same time! The best to you in this contest! :-)
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Date: 7/12/2016 6:08:00 PM
Great write, Broken Wings, beautiful and romantic a 7, good luck in the contest. Thank you so much for visiting my poem "Hope", and yes you did yours correct. Hugs
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Date: 7/12/2016 6:03:00 PM
through the eyes, a passion is born that shivers the soul...my first thought after reading.. good luck this poem should do well
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Date: 7/12/2016 3:53:00 PM
Very stunning piece Constance...This should soar to the top of the charts.
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Date: 7/12/2016 1:41:00 PM
oh what a romantic poem Constance good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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