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Oh sun, I feel you underneath my skin. The heat you radiate amazes me. Your light, a precious gift, I stay within until you dip yourself beneath the sea, red glowing - signaling night to begin. For "The Answer" Poetry Contest of Skat My answer is inside this poem In honor of the sun that I adore!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/21/2015 2:43:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this afternoon. Light & Love

Len Gasun

Date: 8/21/2015 10:50:00 AM

This is a very beautiful poem about the Sun my dearest friend, Andrea. You did it very well in a very beautiful form. I love it so much. Hope I can try this form as well next time. Thanks a lot for sharing. My warmest Congratulations as well on your great win! Many Hugs and cheers! May I have also this opportunity to thank you for your heartwarming visit on my poems, congrats and your encouraging words. God bless you! love lots, Leonora

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2015 8:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, very informative and love the imagery a 7 Hugs Eve

Bill Lindsay

Date: 8/18/2015 5:25:00 AM

What a STAR you are - and what a star You are! ;) xx

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 8/18/2015 12:19:00 AM

Morning Andrea...it's going to be a beautiful day...(:heers,

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/17/2015 11:55:00 PM

Hi Andrea, l'm so glad to see you here on the winners podium. Congratulations on your 2nd place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 11:10:00 PM

Andrea, well done. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/13/2015 12:00:00 PM

Lovely poem for the contest, Andrea, and a solid tribute to our precious Sun. Best wishes for the contest. Also, thank you for your nice comment on my poem, Sunrise Sunset. Sandra

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/13/2015 2:00:00 AM

The best song to starlight ever! Simple and filled with what we feel, see and know is our very life. Love how you paint with words!

Daver Austin

Date: 8/12/2015 11:35:00 AM

Just warms my heart. Love, daver

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/11/2015 11:29:00 PM

Andrea, you have captured the beauty of the sun in this piece. I got a feeling its going to shine bright in the contest:-)Alexis 7

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/10/2015 8:43:00 PM

G'day Andrea... the sun is the path of life and I can sense its warmth in your poem - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Constance La France

Date: 8/10/2015 6:53:00 PM

Andrea, I came back to read this beautiful and soothing and thanks for visiting my randomling poem, yes I noticed many are doing several but I love my one randomling

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/10/2015 8:47:00 AM

oh yes! I can feel it with your words! Such a sunny feel. Way to go in the contest, Andie!

Jennifer Walker

Date: 8/9/2015 11:42:00 PM

I can feel the love you have of the sun and it's rays.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/9/2015 10:30:00 PM

Very nice seasonal poem! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2015 7:04:00 PM

Interesting work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..The sun does help us in so many ways ..God richly blessed us by setting the earth at just the right angle so that we could benefit from the great sun..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/9/2015 5:29:00 PM

feel the heat mmm great poem Andrea gl in contest hugs 7

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/9/2015 11:24:00 AM

In your heart you are a sun worshiper and would have felt right at home in ancient Egypt as a follower of Ra the sun God. Good poem. Emile.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/9/2015 2:29:00 AM

Beautiful sunny poem. Good Luck in the contest, SuZ

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/8/2015 9:51:00 PM

I see you posted another strong entry, good luck and thank you for the heads up on less than 7.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/8/2015 5:06:00 PM

a nice summery one here, andrea, I'm a sun worshipper too, I always feel so much better when the sun is shining...I just KNEW you would like my new contest! in fact, I thought of you as soon as I got the idea for it! I think you like writing in a structured, exact way, and I know you like shorty poems

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2015 3:28:00 PM

Beautifully penned Andrea - just we had a bit more sun over here but your poem made up for the lack of sunshine:-) I have not had time to even write for this one:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2015 2:11:00 PM

- This matched perfectly to the present day, Andrea - Beautiful - I wish you good luck in the contest ..... and lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/8/2015 1:09:00 PM

We've had rain these last few days and I'm missing the sunshine. There's no better "pick me up" than a warm, sunny day... I loved the vivid images in this beautiful poem. A very nice write for the contest, Andrea! Good luck to you!... Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly on my poem :)