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Poetry/Monchielle Stanza/Oh, My Beloved Snow
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1608-832-19
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 19, 2023
For the International Contest, A Monchielle Stanza
Sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/10/24

Third Place

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"Rain let her jealousy and envy slip out of her fingertips to destroy my beautiful Snow." Quote by _Constance Rain came to destroy Snow, and she was not gentle: Rain was truly enraged, jealous of Snow's beauty; and a wild storm she staged. Rain came to destroy Snow, I wept as Snow faded: by day's end he was gone, Rain's mission was complete; the trees bare- brown the lawn. Rain came to destroy Snow, Sad, I just went to bed: in the morn' I heard him, whisper come, come my love; Snow covered each tree limb. Rain came to destroy Snow, but he blanketed all: and bathed the forest white, I danced with Snow's snowflakes; magic with rainbow light.

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Silent One

Date: 1/12/2024 11:06:00 AM

Lovely poem..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2024 12:53:00 PM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/10/2024 11:30:00 AM

Love the dancing snowflakes Constance. Truly lovely. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2024 5:37:00 PM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/10/2024 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations Lin! Your delightful poem "Oh, My Beloved Snow," has placed "Third" in my contest. Your poem stood out with your superb use of personification. Very well done my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2024 5:37:00 PM

Emile, thank you so much for the contest, and my placement, and the for compliment and congratulations, appreciate, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2023 8:41:00 AM

Constance , a weird thing is happening to me in this contest. I need to find out if you have the same glitch as I do. I'll explain in a Soupmail. By the way, I love your personification here

Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2023 4:56:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, I will go look at your soupmail, though I am not aware of any glitch, blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/19/2023 3:11:00 PM

loved the refrain and the emotion you conveyed through the rain/snow metaphor. I was delighted to learn that the snow prevailed. A simply lovely poem. have a pleasant evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2023 11:32:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment, Season Greetings !

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/19/2023 3:00:00 PM

So lovely read! A favorite..

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2023 11:33:00 AM

Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment and the FAV, Season Greetings !

Silent One

Date: 12/19/2023 11:40:00 AM

You did this form so well and I really liked your refrain.. I do like a refrain in a poem as it gives it a melodic rhythm...

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2023 11:35:00 AM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate and Season Greetings

Jay Narain

Date: 12/19/2023 9:55:00 AM

Nice musical theme, It makes me feel like dancing in the snow.

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2023 11:35:00 AM

Jay, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment, appreciate and Season Greetings