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Oh How I Miss You

Like the good old days
we're together everywhere
but you don't bark anymore.
I know you are there
peaceful in my quiet dreams
walking happily with me.

Each visit's unique,
I share my daily routine
but you insist on love themes.
When I said love you,
you responded happily
barking softly in my dream.

August 21, 2017
Placed 1st: Oh how I miss you
Sponsor: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
HM: Strand select K contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George Date: 10/30/2022 9:18:00 AM I assume this is about your dog ! After being together for long, it is painful to lose its sweet presence. Appreciate your sweet sentiments for your pet dog ! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/20/2018 5:51:00 PM I see this oldie was a FIRST place win. Belated congrats on this beauty, if I never told you so before. Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 8/25/2017 5:34:00 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2017 5:42:00 PM Thank you so much!

Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2017 2:21:00 AM A heartfelt poem Vijay I am sure there are many that can relate to your lovely words:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2017 5:27:00 AM Thanks Jan!

Charlie Smith Date: 8/24/2017 10:18:00 PM Back to say well done and congratulations Vijay... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2017 5:26:00 AM Thanks Charlie!

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/24/2017 10:12:00 PM Congrats for great win well deserved. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2017 5:26:00 AM Thanks Subimal!

Anita Harris Date: 8/24/2017 6:02:00 PM Congratulations on your contest win! Very well-deserved! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 6:18:00 PM Thanks Anita!

Joseph May Date: 8/24/2017 5:52:00 PM Congrats on your win Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 6:18:00 PM Thanks Joseph!

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 8/24/2017 5:44:00 PM Very nice Vijay - congratulations! :-) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 6:19:00 PM Thanks, Greg--congrats to you as well!

Heidi Sands Date: 8/24/2017 5:34:00 PM Congratulations Vijay!! #1 win !! yay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 6:20:00 PM Thanks Heidi--congrats to you as well!

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 8/24/2017 5:30:00 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 6:17:00 PM Thanks Dale--congrats to you as well!

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Date: 8/24/2017 5:20:00 PM Congratulations ViJay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2017 6:16:00 PM Many thanks, Cecelia!

Karen Croft Date: 8/23/2017 6:05:00 PM very nice wording in your poem. Thank you for your comments on my poetry! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/23/2017 6:33:00 PM Thanks, Karen. Appreciate your comments!

Akkina Downing Date: 8/22/2017 7:39:00 PM I've lost my cat a while back, she was my baby, we always had ice cream after lunch. Vijay your poem is absolutely beautiful.. good luck in the contest! hugs :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/22/2017 8:30:00 PM Thank you Akkina..such lovely feedback. Quite touching..your ice cream date with your cat!

Susan Ashley Date: 8/22/2017 4:21:00 PM Hi Vijay, my eyes misted reading your write! So genuine and heartfelt and your write is so relatable. You touched my heart. Good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/22/2017 4:27:00 PM Thanks Susan, for your lovely comments! The pets do touch our hearts!!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/22/2017 12:46:00 PM The dream, then reality...strong emotions. Nicely done, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/22/2017 1:31:00 PM Thanks Kim--love your comments!

Lewis Raynes Date: 8/22/2017 7:24:00 AM I love this, I love how dogs are in the moment always. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/22/2017 9:01:00 AM Thanks Lewis--appreciate your comments!

Russell Sivey Date: 8/22/2017 5:38:00 AM Oh, this put a tear in my eye! I have such a soft spot for dogs, they are precious animals and forever companions! It is true, I have had dreams about my previous dogs, and being with them brought joy in my life! I have another one right now and he is so special to me, I don't know what I'd do without my furry companion! Your poem explained the grief quite excellently and allowed me to grieve again for my previous dogs! What a spectacular piece my friend! Such a tender poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/22/2017 6:49:00 AM So happy to read your lovely comments Russell--I feel the love you have for your pets--your kindness flows in everything you write!

Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 8:20:00 PM Most animals are here to show us, unconditional love...and most of us show them conditional pain...great write Vijay about our furry friends...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/22/2017 6:44:00 AM Thank you WW--lovely thoughts!

Anita Harris Date: 8/21/2017 7:35:00 PM "You don't bark anymore" tugs at my heart! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 7:38:00 PM Mine too! Delighted by your visit Anita!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/21/2017 7:22:00 PM Dogs hold a special place in our hearts and when they depart this world they remain forever in our hearts. This is beautiful Vijay! I hope it does great in the contest! : ) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 7:37:00 PM Thank you Connie, for your lovely feedback!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/21/2017 5:21:00 PM So sweet and tugs at the heart strings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 5:39:00 PM Lovely feedback--Thanks Andrea!

Sunlite Wanter Date: 8/21/2017 4:40:00 PM My little dog has become almost blind, and for that reason she doesn't respond like she did. I'll be singing your song, Vijay too soon. Thanks for writing it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 5:37:00 PM Hope you face it well when it happens. Thanks for your feedback!

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/21/2017 3:58:00 PM Reads like contender in the contest..Way to go..I enjoyed reading your work..I am reading between the lines that you had a dog to die or come up missing..I feel the pain..Thanks for dropping by my page..I finished my poem Eclipse if you care to read the completed work..Sara Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 5:35:00 PM Yes, it is true--our dog passed away after about 15 years being with us--he was lovely. I will surely look-up your Eclipse, now. Thank you for lovely feedback.

Charlie Smith Date: 8/21/2017 3:39:00 PM A best friend for sure, well done Vijay... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 5:32:00 PM Delighted by your visit and your comments--Thanks Charlie!

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