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Ocean

“The inner beacon flashes in the tempestuous ocean as the escort in the divine course to the final destination” – By Poet An ancient mariner in the ocean called life, I am sailing solemnly seemingly for ages in the limitless luminosity of the sunshine, and in the drifting course where trying tempest rages. On the sapphire swells of the swaying waves, rising to the sky and falling to the trough low, my senile boat pitches, and I struggle hard to keep on sailing, the voyage is veritably slow. The film of the moonless night falls silently on the tossing surface of the ebony ocean. As the skyline subsides with hope in the dark horizon, what lies in obtrusive obscurity I’ve no notion. I’ve promised the ocean I’ll reach the shore yonder, I need to sail to the end of my time and far. Forlorn in the unknown ocean losing the bearing, I search for the omnipresent pole star. I discover in the end the guiding beacon of the divine light hidden within me. Tracing the destined course to the final destination, its flash I’ve been relentlessly striving so long to see. The wind on the sagging sail is sluggish, with its driving draft drained, it can no longer blow. Before the boat becomes motionless, to the land of promise I must go. Waiting for me at the fated fringe of my time, is the eternal realm of the heavenly shore. I don’t know why even now in the tormenting ocean I am for. _________________ March 25, 2023 Word chosen : Ocean Contest : Word Challenge - "O" Words Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 3/27/2023 10:31:00 AM
- Hurray ... - Back with a congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:17:00 PM
A "...need to sail to the end of my time..." I love it Subminal! Congratulations on your win!:)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/26/2023 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for liking the poem.
Date: 3/26/2023 12:40:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your beautiful poem, I love your quote too, blessings, Constance
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/26/2023 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Date: 3/25/2023 1:26:00 PM
- Really beautifully written, Subimal :) - Good luck in the contest ... I bet a top win for this poem :) - hugs
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Subimal. I love "fated fringe of my time," yet all of your lines are exquisite. Best of luck!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/26/2023 9:51:00 PM
Thank you Ann for your encouraging comment.
Date: 3/25/2023 7:32:00 AM
Spiritual and philosophical interpretation of life - deep and meaningfully portrayed!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/26/2023 9:51:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment.

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