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Obituary

I’d be honoured, given my life, so grand - My Obituary, drawn by my hand. Who strutted in my shoes around the earth? Exactly, I know best what my life’s worth! First of all, by natural selection, Life and I shared mutual affection. Life loved me right til death and long before, But I insist I madly loved her more. Through strife and struggle we struck a fair deal - She gives me grief but grants me time to heal. She kindly pinky promised from the start - My wealth flows from the bottom of my heart. She swore to me that despite all tears shed I’d laugh more than cry by the time I’m dead. She urged to seize the day and have a ball, She enticed me to take less and give all. Less is more by far, she expressed out loud - “No carryon to afterlife allowed”! In sync we cried and laughed, but we had fun, And morphed organically into one. My earthly worth is my life’s full credit, Obituary, no need to edit. I’m glad this final tribute note I have written and signed, “To my Life! With love!” March 24, 2023 Sponsor: Constance La France Contest : Obituary

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Date: 5/5/2023 12:00:00 PM
This is a beautiful obituary and gratitude for the life you've had. But don't leave us yet, Margarita :) Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 3/27/2023 10:20:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, well deserved Margarita :) - hugs
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/27/2023 11:29:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2023 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations Maggie. A fine write:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/26/2023 9:20:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2023 4:33:00 PM
A Beautiful obituary, Margarita. You need to save it for a long, long time. :) Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/26/2023 7:42:00 PM
Saving in my hard drive:) Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2023 3:12:00 PM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/26/2023 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 3/26/2023 2:30:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your placement :)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/26/2023 7:43:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2023 12:59:00 PM
Wow - great obit Margarita! Congratulations on your win!:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/26/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 3/26/2023 12:28:00 PM
Margarita, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your beautiful poem, very creative, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/25/2023 2:22:00 AM
Such a lovely concept and beautiful twist on the prompt
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/25/2023 6:09:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/24/2023 1:28:00 PM
I was wondering how to craft a poem for that word, you did a great job, best wishes
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2023 7:17:00 PM
I at first was wondering myself:) Thank you.
Date: 3/24/2023 12:23:00 PM
Wow amazing job with this topic!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/24/2023 12:10:00 PM
I really enjoyed this whimsical and positive take on the traditional obituary, very creative, hope it does well for you in the contest~
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, on a whim it was;)
Date: 3/24/2023 10:37:00 AM
- She loved life so much, Margarita ... a beautiful poem - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/24/2023 8:39:00 AM
Obviously well thought out and written, Maggie. Anyone who lives life on their own terms, most likely dies satisfied. Kinda sad thinking of your obituary:( Amazing where a poet's mind will go when seeking inspiration. Be well. Have a top shelf weekend:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2023 11:00:00 AM
Constance and her alphabet… I go to sleep thinking none of the words I can relate… then a second thought, I Do… Obituary is born:) Thank you. Not going anywhere!

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