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November

An Arctic wind comes reaping the mild air, breath hangs in clouds and grass hides under frost, low morning sun soaks branches soon stripped bare, boots wallow in the reds and golds now lost. Chevrons of Geese head south for warmer climes, ground creatures bedding down until the spring, their instincts telling them it is the time when nature's heartbeat slows, and no birds sing. No kindness shown as autumn's laid to rest, no mercy given, winter's blade unsheathed, it's willing victim gladly bares it's breast and falls, in pallid shades the land is wreathed. Each year this drama plays, the rise and fall consoled by distant promise, spring will call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/22/2016 8:01:00 PM
Hi Viv Chevrons of geese? Nice line. Come down here its 45 Celcius in Nov. I will take the cold.
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Date: 11/13/2016 9:02:00 AM
WHAT A PURE BEAUTY OF A SONNET FOR ME TO FIND AND ENJOY READING FIRST THING THIS GREAT MORN! I rate this as tops in sonnets. As it describes the subject and flows so very well. A7, adding to my fav list.. perhaps you should consider doing more sonnets.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/14/2016 12:23:00 AM
From a seasoned Sonneteer as yourself, Robert, I take that as a huge compliment. Yes, I really should write more. Will try harder. Many thanks. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/11/2016 11:26:00 AM
Elegant verse, sir!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/14/2016 12:22:00 AM
Thanks, Duke, it appears to have struck a chord. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/6/2016 8:25:00 PM
Loved how you illustrated the coming of winter! Now come to Canada so I can show you a real winter!!! :) Cheers!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/7/2016 12:58:00 AM
Arthur, I wouldn't last five minutes there. Would need whisky intravenously. regards, Viv
Date: 11/6/2016 4:01:00 PM
Great imagery, Viv. especially liked your second line. A 10, but 7 will have to do. ~~~ Darlene
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/7/2016 12:59:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, I do hope you're well. Viv x
Date: 11/5/2016 11:02:00 AM
The breeze of beauty touches my skin as initiated by your lovely poem ... CayCay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/6/2016 1:46:00 AM
Thanks, CayCay, hope you're well. Not a lot of hours in the day for me at present, am hoping to have some free time to play catch up with everyone soon. Viv x
Date: 11/4/2016 3:43:00 PM
Autumn's nice. Could we just skip winter?
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/6/2016 1:46:00 AM
Naked sunbathing in winter is dangerous, for a male, Jean. Frostbite. Small frostbite x
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/5/2016 4:46:00 AM
In winter, summer, or both Viv?
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/5/2016 1:50:00 AM
Agree, Jean, I'm not a huge fan. Seasonal affected disorder and all that. And naked sunbathing is no fun, either. Viv x
Date: 11/3/2016 8:55:00 AM
Quite a lovely farewell sonnet to Fall, Viv. I particularly like your 12th line.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/5/2016 1:50:00 AM
Thanks, Lin, lovely to hear from you. Viv x
Date: 11/3/2016 7:45:00 AM
Lovely November brings the hope of Spring:) great sonnet, Viv:)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/3/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks, Jo, a bleak time, but only temporary. Viv
Date: 11/3/2016 5:32:00 AM
Lovely imagery in striking words ... message of hope ... very nice ....
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/3/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Probir, appreciate it. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/3/2016 1:37:00 AM
Such a lovely read, Viv W. Thank you for sharing. -- Wesley C.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/3/2016 8:39:00 AM
My pleasure, Wesley. Regards, Viv

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