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hindered thoughts of childhood often elude my mind memories come in fragments now escaping through corners of eyes sometimes i see you in dreams waiting for you to reach out emotionless i speak eager for one last touch till you fade again home is but a memory of a father's love and devotion mother's lullabies fading in time eternally gone from all but mind

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Date: 3/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:41:00 AM
Very nice entry Sandra. Thanks for your entry.
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:57:00 AM
A very sincere acrostic, Sandra. Well done.
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:10:00 AM
This is sad Sandra, but beautifully written. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:24:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sandra!!! Congratulations on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" win. :) Hugs, Eve
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Date: 2/8/2016 7:02:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" LINDA
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Date: 2/8/2016 12:22:00 AM
A very emotive write Sandra, I wonder how much we could recall, if life was not so full on.? Or if we wanted? thanks for your visit to my page.'
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:55:00 PM
For me, nostalgic with a touch of envy. Well written, Sandra.
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:57:00 PM
A lovely acrostic, Sandra. You make it look and sound easy; it flows smoothly, and the content is ably presented. gl if it is for the contest. // paul
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Date: 2/3/2016 12:18:00 AM
Wow....this is impressive! This is the way poetry is meant to be written. I see this being a top winner Sandra. #7 I must fave this one!
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:54:00 AM
thank you Connie for your kind words! I kept attempting this contest and then just put the words down the side of my muse and let her take off with it...i guess it worked :)
Date: 2/2/2016 5:20:00 PM
if I inject my energy....into you memory....would you let me be....your only destiny.....very Beautiful write Sandra....;)
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:41:00 PM
thank you so much...it's been too long since i have written! Hugs :)
Date: 2/2/2016 3:31:00 PM
wow, I am SO glad to see you taking part in the contests, Sandra. I;ve always admired you as one of the best free verse writers at Soup and this shows why!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2016 5:13:00 PM
aww thanks Andrea...coming from you that is a huge compliment! Hugs

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